My favourite line was "When you start saying 'artiste' you get cut off." I can picture that scene perfectly. Thanks for sharing your stories. They are really good!

The more I read your stuff, the more speechless I get. So forgive me ..but there's just on thing circulating around in my head - perfection. You know the kind of perfection you wanna print out, frame in and put up on the wall for all to see. It's late and I tend to ramble. But gosh, thank U. That's all really, thank U.

Aww, so bittersweet. Beautiful prose.

This was beautifully written.

This was wonderfully beautiful.

You are a truely amazing writer.

I completely love this.

Wow. The tone of that fic really mirrors how I felt when I saw that episode. Disappointed. I love Rory and Jess together, and I hate the way Rory is changing...I guess the question is whether she'll change back, like some of us do when we grow up. Your story's sad, but I think it's a realistic portrayal of what might going on in the character's heads. Really well done.

This is great. Very true, very insightful, very, very well written.

Thank you for not putting Jess in the metaphorical rut simply because Rory Gilmosre walked away. This was wonderfully well done.

Oh god, that was so good. Please continue? I like Jess' perspective and how dark he seems. You did this really well. Cheers.

Very good.

I loved how you showed that he could move on.

"And it's not that bad."

You showed what a lot of authors can't (including me). That people exist outside love... wow. wow. wow. did I mention WOW?

This was so beautifully written - sad, in a way, as it should be. This girl's got to stop fucking with his heart.

Wow, that was really powerful.

"Three years since their lips last touched."

You know, that was exactly what I was thinking too. It had been too long.

Great, great job. Very poignant.

This was simply beautiful. It was perfectly Jess, and so sad and hopeful at the same time.

'And he’s got a life. Back booths, bad poets, and friends who might care if he stops showing up for work.

And it’s not that bad.'

Perfect end that gives hope for the future. Thank you for writing it!

*hugs*

You are...I have no words. God, I'm such a shitty reviewer. Okay, I need to focus.

I just love that Jess is grown-up, and I love that he can handle it and I love that he has this great life. I love the way you write him. Hell, I love the way you write, period. :)

Thank you for this. *nods* Thank you!