Good story, hope you continue it sometime.

*sigh*

Stop coddleing Ron and just have him get over himself.

You said it was a RLu, right? So bring Luna in.

Sorry if this sounds harsh, I just really like Ron when he is not in his fits of jealosy.

Keep Writing.

Nice. I like the fact that Hermione is good at something other than just the books.

Now, I think it would be a good idea to solve the RonHermione issue soon; because I believe that the longer time that passes the harder it will be; it could even end breaking the trio's friendship (well, of course that won't happen if you don't want it to, but it would be something to expect).

Anyway, this fic looks promising. I like how the trio is training to get better. I think that Ginny, Luna and NEville should do the same, maybe the rest of the DA as well.

Well, I hope you'll update soon. See you next chapter.

I've very much enjoyed the read!

Eskaybe

Very good so far and look forward to more updates. Have a suggestion too, I noticed some word usage and spelling error and recommend you find someone to proof read what you have written so far and repost the corrected chapters.

this was a good chapter! about the thing with having few reviews being a good or bad thing, it depends... a lot of people read but don't review so that makes a difference, i don't think it's bad if you don't get a lot of reveiws, because i've read some stories that have been really good but only have 20 reviews and other stories that sucked that had 10... you get more reviews as you become more well known... please update soon because i can't wait for more!

Awesome chapter! Plz update soon!

dave i havent gone awol i have been online all week. you must have ben sleeping.. im sorry. please dont be mad at me.

~kit

Please, no OC! It’s really irritating to have OC in fanfictions. HP cannon has enough characters, why invent another more? The only thing I can stand is ONE OC, but like a new Auror or teacher, OC students is just stupid, and if she/he/they are/is American is even worse.

Great chapter! Plz update soon!

i kinda wish they got rid of ron lol

Those were some very daring things Harry said to Hermione huh? _ when's Luna coming into the picture? i do enjoy R/L just as much as H/Hr ! cant wait for your next chapter!

Lina

this is a good chapter! i thought you did really good at explaining the wandless magic stuff! update really soon! thanks!

Blast, I had forgotten that I already had mentioned some of my reservations in an earlier review. Sorry for raising them again, the repetition was unnecessary. So ignore the paragraph about the battle sequence as the first review was adequate for that.

I have been enjoying the story but a few points did arise.

No has been no discussion on the aftermath of the attack at Bill's wedding. Was Bill and Fleur Ok? Any mention in the papers. Why were the aurors so slow to turn up? I wasn't expecting a full chapter on it, but a paragraph in passing, as currently it reads like it never happened the day after and no-one cared about the deaths.

Where is Ginny now? If Harry and Hermione are doing homework in Ginny's room because Ron is being a prat, where is Ginny? At the moment she wont be happy with Harry or Hermione (even though Hermione is innocent so far in the Harry-Ginny story). If Ron is being insufferable, then why are they suffering him. Harry and Hermione could go back to Grimmauld place and do their homework there if Ron isn't interested.

In the battle when Harry first spotted the dementors, he turns around and ignores them! Harry can cast a patronus, he has done while in direct close contact with them. This time he is a distance away, so he cannot be feeling the full effect and doesn't cast it, knowing that most adult witches and wizards cannot cast it. At the time the order had broken through the inferi, so the dementors were the larger problem, so I would think Harry would cast his patronus and then switch back to the inferi as they were attacking Hermione and himself.

In the books, Harry has always been very good about "thinking on his feet" when under pressure. In this battle, Harry acted quite poorly.

The byplay with Ron and Harry has been quite good. Though I think Harry is close to pointing out that as Ron hasn't asked Hermione to be his girlfriend, Ron cannot claim Hermione as "his girl". Certainly Hermione actions indicate that she doesn't think much of Ron at all at the moment.