Yet another masterpiece. Kio's longing was a real pleasure to intake, along with all of his tries to reach Soubi, and how he silently fought off the rising despair. Again I think, the feelings were nailled down really well in this piece. I especially want to mention Kio's irrational outbursts in Soubi's appartment, when he started yelling and hitting stuff, eventually knocking out a picture of Seimei if I understood that part right. Anyway that sudden boil of emotions really added to his character in my opinion, made him seem more real, and completely overtaken by his compressed emotions. Oh, and I really loved the revelation, when Kio cursed Seimei, wishing he'd die, and at the end when he noticed the newsletter, those were like words straight to fate's ears, that last part just made me go, uuuuugh, saddening and creepy, nice foreshadowing. Anyway a marvelous fanfic.

Once more, I'm crying and in awe, if not in love. Always, your writing is so painfully evocative, stirring up images and emotions that build the loveliest angst. I will definitely plan a visit to your LJ.

oh my, poor Kio, this nearly made me cry! Soubi can be such an ass sometimes!

Thanks for creating this wonderful piece of fandom! *adds to favs*

*cries* KIO! (huggles) don't worry about that bastard! _ you wrote this very well, i could even feel what Kio was! well done!

-Inuome92

This is a really beautifully written piece... I love it.

...oh...my...god...

...I'd say something, but I can't...

...that was really...good...well, not good...great, excellent, amazing, whatever. think of a word for 'godly' and I guess you could use that. if (note the 'if') it was copied or not, i wouldn't really care. from the show, not from the show, from someone else, not from someone else...that was GOOD. *blinks eyes so she can stop crying*

I love your writing so much.