| Reviews for Darkened Wings |
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PastelMokey chapter 3 . 7/2/2017 i need more of this shit. |
LunarisDraconis chapter 3 . 8/26/2015 Ugh cliff hangers it was just getting good |
syngtu8 chapter 3 . 7/2/2015 Please update. |
Lizzybear54 chapter 3 . 7/5/2013 Update soon! I really hope that the Dursley's and Dudley's friends get what's coming to them soon. They deserve to suffer the same way Harry is. Lizzy |
Hell Jester chapter 3 . 8/26/2012 EPICNESS INCARNATE. |
KitsuneDango chapter 3 . 3/16/2012 omfg you have to write more! its so interesting and cool and sad, i actually cried, i need to read more,please update! |
Eris Potter-Charmed Child chapter 3 . 2/3/2012 Love it more! |
Livesluvesdrarrys chapter 3 . 11/10/2011 i really like your fanfiction but its been sooooo long since you last updated ill keep waiting though :) i dont think you should change anything! keep writing its really good |
Me4Ever999 chapter 3 . 6/11/2011 okay so im reading this and thinking why in the world you would stop writing this fanfic when its so fucking awesome |
fjdsklfjkdsljfkldsjfklds chapter 3 . 5/1/2011 I love it. Am I terrible person? |
M.H.A chapter 3 . 12/5/2010 So I should have reviewed sooner. I love this fic, I've told you before. There's something about it that makes you want to read more even though its distressing and painful and cruel. You want to know what's going to happen, what's with the wings, who he might become. I read the original and I think you've got some awesome improvements even though I still recall the first read with fondness and anxiety. I think you spell sirius as serious in the first and third chapters - its probably an autospell thing that you can easily correct. If you ever want a beta. Also I'm curious about the potential of the narrator having a voice that you use in the first chapter. Very interesting. Anyway. Please write more soon. Your avid fan. |
koishii-tenshi chapter 3 . 11/25/2010 So, I can honestly say that I adore this story. It is really well written, and it gets the depressed mood across without being a cliche, over-the-top, "this happens, and then this, and this" doesn't his life just suck? Stories. It genuinely pulls you in, and makes you feel apart of it. I'm jealous, lol. Can't wait for the fourth chapter! !K_T! |
TheLittleDarkFox chapter 3 . 10/5/2010 I can't remember what the original fic was like but ther re-write is very good... slightly crazy, but in a good way. It seems to work anyway and it's definitely got my attention at any rate so I want to know what will happen next... even if I have to wait I think it'll be worth it. |
tarnished silver things chapter 3 . 9/30/2010 Shrt, but I like it. Sadisitic? Yeah. I think that it's very good; I like the length, and truthfully I don;t see much that needs to be fixed. They get the collar off? And my doesn't college sound FUN . . . M. |
FoxGlove chapter 3 . 9/16/2010 Can't wait for the next chapter. It's alittle dark, but capitivating. |