Another amazing piece of writing...

~IGC t DM

right on... I loved it!

So very, very ... GOD. The way you get me inside Grissom's head is incredible. You really have a way with words.

I can't say anything more than..

amazing.

Excellent story. Well written and realistic. Much better than a lot of the poorly written stories that get published.

RAW! The imagery is riviting, breathtaking. I felt the pain your words conveyed. I crave these kind of stories, they seem so close to character, you could see this really unfold. Can't wait for more!

totally beautiful and deep and amazing...

lol didn't know it was yu all those times her xd different name then on lj i see:) great story it simply rocked

Wow. That was...very powerful, so full of sadness, but so good in the same time. I just love how you managed to write Grissom's fellings once more, perfectly, with the 'you' POV, which allowed us to be inside and outside of his mind/soul.

Yeah, you're very talented, I'm just wordless right know. I love the end, Sara's actions are so sweet, I had the feeling to feel her love for him as she took care of him. sigh...

Thank you for this story, it just rocks, so do you.

*Elialys*

wow, angsty, powerful, moody, terrific.

Can I just say wow? That was excellent. Very visceral piece. Excuse me while I go read everything else you wrote...

Tallulah

Gorgeous my dear

Completely amazing. The use of the poetry, combined with your poetic writing style, was brilliant. I love the way it's written from Grissom's POV, but second person, almost as if he's on the outside looking in - because in times of great pain, that's what life feels like.

Its so sad, but so good, as well. Great story. Thanks so much! Keep up the awesome work!