Por favor atualize...amei sua história que Deus te abençoe sempre

In chapter about snape class, you used word rice instead of rise.

I wish you had continued this.

Can you please update this story. Idk y u stopped

This is one of those amazing fics that exist here. In my opinion it is well written by how good the story flows. No beta needed.

This one is not gore but not for the faint hearted either. And most possibly abandoned. But worth reading.

this is god damn awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

Could of been a great story except some major problems.

1.) You are telling the story as if it was a book you read and are giving a report on. Where is the character interaction? When do the actually speak? What do the actually say?

2.) You seem to have problems with homophones. You seem to be confused on the use of words such as there, their, and they're.

I hope u can write again soon this story and some others u wrote are really interesting.

Found this story as a favorite of another author. Really enjoying the story line. Keep up the good work.

please continue to write you story as it is one of the best harry potter storys i have read

I really like this story. I can't wait until you post the next chapter.

this going to be updated soon? It been 5 years or something... So I am going to take that as an unlikely!

Anyway it is a good story, one of the more original I have ever seen, I'm a tad bit sad that it hasn't been as popular asit should have been.

Bydd Byth.

P.S. Keep writing, Preverably this story.

update

CONTINUE LOVING THE FANFICTION

nice i hope this gets updated