| Reviews for Posessivness |
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Transcendentalist Tangencies chapter 1 . 7/19/2012 Awww, cuteness! :D |
Akumarayne chapter 1 . 3/24/2010 Great! I really enjoyed reading this. I like the idea of drunken Fate getting molested, then him saying he wanted to remember the experience. |
allyhandra chapter 1 . 5/4/2009 Geeze i feel like im stalking your stories XD But they are awesome and you have a lot of my fav parings! I had totally forgotten about my AlbelXFayte love, its been so long since ive played star ocean T.T so yeah... back to topic, AWESOME STORY. Twas great i loved the couple, personalities, and the raspberry vodka. Yupp Yupp. Keeo writing these great works plz! adios |
Miss Nox chapter 1 . 4/27/2006 Love the theme and Albel is PERFECT in this! He'd be perfect anyway but this fanfiction is so awesome! Write more! "Sophia must die! FaytxAlbel forever!" |
Sporky92 chapter 1 . 4/13/2006 I love this story! I don't think you made them ooc at all... I'd elaborate, however , people already think I'm insane. I liked it alot. You should write a story describing Albel actually getting him drunk. |
Tolanya chapter 1 . 4/13/2006 That was the kind of adorabley sexy yaoi that makes my stomach knot up. Which I love. This was such a great one-shot. I love you. |
Zenphoenixa chapter 1 . 4/13/2006 *Points and laughs at the flamers* You know... I'm still yet to hear one decent, valid, SUBSTANTIATED reason as to why the AlbelxFayt pairing is so abhorrent. Not to mention I'm surprised my eyeballs haven't rolled out of their sockets yet based on how many times I've seen the words "disgusting" and "sickening" used on their own to back up the so-called argument against the pairing - a pairing which, by the way, is undeniably canon based on the overwhelming in-game evidence and interaction between Albel and Fayt, which is certainly more than could be said for many of the other possible pairings involving those two characters. If anyone wants to challenge that claim then make my day, punk. I have all the proof I need at my disposal! But this is supposed to be a review, so onwards to the reviewy stuff. :D Heh, I wish I could've been present to see Fayt get totally hammered enough to start hitting on potted palm trees ("IT'S MR PELVIS ERESTLEY!") but then again I'm just sadistic like that, so feel free to ignore me. XD Lol, considering Fayt's body size though, I'm surprised three bottles of vodka didn't outright kill him. XD XD *Snickers* I liked the possessiveness theme a lot since Albel treating Fayt as "his" is exactly the sort of thing he'd do (not to mention Albel literally voiced ownership in the game anyway and I love being reminded of that! XD ), and the fic was well written to boot. :3 Also, additional kudos for writing the first ever AlbelxFayt fic I've read where Fayt actually gives Albel a hickey in return - I can't believe I've never seen it go both ways before! O_O XD Great work hon, and remember - us fangirls eat flamers for dinner and poop them back out. :3 RAWR! |
Ex-ANIMEADDICT chapter 1 . 4/13/2006 Aw! It was so sweet! There were a lot of details and fluffy so I'm very pleased. There weren't many, if any, typos so I think I will get props to the homey AkizukiSakura. There was a tad bit of OOC-ness, but it can't be helped sometimes, neh? |
coti chapter 1 . 4/11/2006 you $%&ing whore fayte isnt gay, well he might be but that is his buisness, and unless he invites you to a gay 3 sum stfu |
Sentai chapter 1 . 4/11/2006 O! Nice. -Adds to favorites- I think there's something wrong with me..when evere, and I mean when evere, I read a story an Albel says Maggot or worm in there, I start laughing my ass off. xDD I've been battling with Albel too much in the game. xDD Beat the game in three days..but someone stole my memory card and my power cord! DD: So I have to start all over..great story..xDD I would like to see more..more Albel possesiveness of teh uke. x3 |
divinesuperstition chapter 1 . 4/10/2006 God gooly goodness girl. I love Star Ocean, I played the game for over 150 hours and u bring this along. When i review i don't say anything is good or bad. I mostly go on about technicalities. But there were no technical problems in this one. It was just plain INSANE. Ugh, sickening at best. PLease, let me regain my sanity. It wasn't bad because I could actually follow what was going on. (Being stuck in ur house all spring break can cause u to go crazy.) Anyway it wasn't bad, Just very strange. WAit i take back the sickening part. It's just different I suppose. Who knows, u may get rich off of this one day. (no sarcasm intended) Keep writing, at least ur doing something that can possibly benifit u in the future. I respect all writers. _ (Yes, I right long reviews.) |