DIDNT EVEN read grammar

don't kill yourself I mean it was great
Now I wonder why I read these all the time

I'm lonely am I

I loved it. It wasn't about action like always. I would love to read more.

Love it

I would advice you to go back and revise this story. There are some glaring mistakes, such as the tenses(past/present), that make the reading experience not so smooth.

Seriously, where the fuck did the grammar disapear to, lol.. Found that quite hard to read! Maybe you should look over this again before posting :S The end wasn't as bad as the beginning though, but just wanted to give you some friendly advice: Always double check (if not triple check) your fic for grammatical errors.. And remember to spell check.

-Kirsten

love this fic :D

awwwe he cared for her! :3

ohohohoho~ ohh deidara u naughty bad boy! Tee-hee great job btw! :3

It looks like you really need to improve on your grammar. It's like the story is a nice delicious slice of pie, and all these grammar errors is like you dropping it on the ground. When you post this it's like you're trying to give out floor pie! No one likes floor pie!

I LOVE DEIDARA! sakura on the other hand, can rot in the depths of hades

HEY :D Can u PLZ write more about this? CUZ i really LOVE DEIDARA AND SAKURA FANFICKS! and this one was SOOOOOOOOOOOOO good and i wonder if sasuke and kakashi would ever know what happends and what naruto would have done and what would deidara do next time they meet!

I love the smell of lemon in the morning! ;)

PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL!

Oh wow that was HOT

You should make a sequel.