| Reviews for Dark Outside |
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Sak chapter 17 . 11/12/2019 Yaaay. Tifa being beautiful and Vincent being dramatically gentlemen like Favourite line: "Can my heart even contain joy anymore? Sometimes I wonder if my heart is not unlike a strainer. The bigger, heavier feelings like grief and guilt stay, while the smaller, fleeting moments of joy and contentment slip through the holes." Thank you! |
Sak chapter 16 . 11/12/2019 I get a good laugh in nearly every chapter. You're amazing! "I thought only I could do that thing with the eyebrow. Copycat. I look away. What can I say to that? I don't know how to… 'interact'. Stupid Cid" LOL And yes, chocolate! |
Sak chapter 15 . 11/12/2019 Oh I'm so glad it was a horrible dream of his past too |
Sak chapter 14 . 11/12/2019 Heart wrenching... Very well written. Sad |
Sak chapter 13 . 11/12/2019 Very very raw. I'm glad he cried and of course Marlene is the best one to offer comfort |
Sak chapter 12 . 11/12/2019 Fantastic. |
Sak chapter 11 . 11/12/2019 So much thought... I like his reasoning... Why he is uncaring... And then playing with Marlene :) |
Sak chapter 10 . 11/12/2019 Yeah goodbye cloud |
Sak chapter 9 . 11/12/2019 Toes ARE the silliest! You're amazing |
Sak chapter 8 . 11/12/2019 You're very endearing. Your author notes are sweet. This chapter was sweet. The way you wrote Vincent feeling Tifa's pain or recting to it was very real. |
Sak chapter 7 . 11/12/2019 Haha! Late night games. I'm glad Tifa came back because make would have been sad even with only awesome Vincent Another"loosing" mistake but otherwise great thanks! |
Sak chapter 6 . 11/12/2019 "Find a job? What, something like 'Vincent's Antique Restoration: Odds are he's older than what you have!'? I don't know" Hilarious! And Marlene saying he's awesome was heart breakingly Adorable! |
Sak chapter 5 . 11/12/2019 Vincent is so in character. I just love this first pov and I'm usually not a fan. But when Tifa stretched... Come on... Everyone is thinking it right? Her boobs! Vincent had to notice! |
Sak chapter 4 . 11/12/2019 This is just... Intriguing! I'm so enjoying it ! |
Sak chapter 3 . 11/12/2019 Ah you used loose again instead of lose. And through instead of though. I think. I just really like this. Marlene is perfect! Can't wait for the romance :) |