Reviews for Dark Outside
Sak chapter 17 . 11/12/2019
Yaaay. Tifa being beautiful and Vincent being dramatically gentlemen like
Favourite line:
"Can my heart even contain joy anymore? Sometimes I wonder if my heart is not unlike a strainer. The bigger, heavier feelings like grief and guilt stay, while the smaller, fleeting moments of joy and contentment slip through the holes."

Thank you!
Sak chapter 16 . 11/12/2019
I get a good laugh in nearly every chapter. You're amazing!
"I thought only I could do that thing with the eyebrow. Copycat.
I look away. What can I say to that? I don't know how to… 'interact'. Stupid Cid"
LOL
And yes, chocolate!
Sak chapter 15 . 11/12/2019
Oh I'm so glad it was a horrible dream of his past too
Sak chapter 14 . 11/12/2019
Heart wrenching... Very well written. Sad
Sak chapter 13 . 11/12/2019
Very very raw. I'm glad he cried and of course Marlene is the best one to offer comfort
Sak chapter 12 . 11/12/2019
Fantastic.
Sak chapter 11 . 11/12/2019
So much thought...
I like his reasoning... Why he is uncaring... And then playing with Marlene :)
Sak chapter 10 . 11/12/2019
Yeah goodbye cloud
Sak chapter 9 . 11/12/2019
Toes ARE the silliest!
You're amazing
Sak chapter 8 . 11/12/2019
You're very endearing. Your author notes are sweet.

This chapter was sweet. The way you wrote Vincent feeling Tifa's pain or recting to it was very real.
Sak chapter 7 . 11/12/2019
Haha! Late night games. I'm glad Tifa came back because make would have been sad even with only awesome Vincent

Another"loosing" mistake but otherwise great thanks!
Sak chapter 6 . 11/12/2019
"Find a job? What, something like 'Vincent's Antique Restoration: Odds are he's older than what you have!'? I don't know"

Hilarious!

And Marlene saying he's awesome was heart breakingly Adorable!
Sak chapter 5 . 11/12/2019
Vincent is so in character. I just love this first pov and I'm usually not a fan.
But when Tifa stretched... Come on... Everyone is thinking it right? Her boobs! Vincent had to notice!
Sak chapter 4 . 11/12/2019
This is just... Intriguing! I'm so enjoying it !
Sak chapter 3 . 11/12/2019
Ah you used loose again instead of lose. And through instead of though. I think.
I just really like this. Marlene is perfect!
Can't wait for the romance :)
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