Hmm... I rather like this story, I wasn't sure if I would, but I do.

Oh, and you even used your Japanese correctly, a rare find, to be sure. Sorry, I'm a bit of a stickler when it comes to Japanese grammar. You Japanese usage was very well done, except I believe it is Nihongo wo hanashimasu, rather than ga (and I personally would've added a ka at the end, but that's just me). Great job, I look forward to your update.

-doragon no mizu

Flee...

Wow, it's like you're a totally different person when you're writing! Actually, Katt's like that, too...

You're like those two from Spiral, but I'm not sure which one's Ayumu. Probably either neither or both, I think.

Merrappy ChrismaHannuKwanzaakuh to you!

Realy cool chapter. I like the plot twist of Anna still alive.

Keep it up _

This is another good chapter! I like how you portrayed Anna, Sheena, and Lloyd in this too!

Aw...I was hoping you'd introduce an OC as Lloyd's sister. Hey uh, is Lloyd going to be smarter since he has Anna to take care of him instead of Dirk? Well, this is really good!

it's to bad you didnt keep anna baby alive, but hey am in joying this so keep it up.

Ah... I'm not used to this kind of Anna. But the story is very interesting and well thought out. So I really enjoy reading it. ...I'm hoping Kratos will show up soon enough.

Anyway, great story. I'm glad to see it continued.

You are SO lucky that I started reading Sheeloyd a few days ago! -

Only seventeen? How daring. -

Wow. Very nice ideas. I like the way you've made the characters your own... I also like Anna's story, and insanity. Actually, you made her sound a bit like Tohru, but in the story she's really more like Anna.

Like, a cross between Tohru and Anna.

You know what? Why the heck am I doing this? I owe you a flame! Meanie. Okay, here it is then.

[quote'flame']

Flame flame flame. Flamieflam fame. So there.

-anonymous

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Okay, now that's over with... but really, it's very good so far. So I'm sure everyone (including me **admitted GRUDGINGLY ((meanie))**) is looking forward to the next chapter.

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You'd better appreciate my kindness!

Did you know more people read stories with reveiws than stories without? I know I do, but then again I read the reviews. Hm, now what to say about the story... I know!

"Lloyd's right! I can't sing. Holy Song!"

Sorry random. Also I found out what indignation means today. Yay for me.

*Just finished playing Tales* *First Tales fanfic* O! I likey!

Reviewing first again, I'll start with this story.