| Reviews for Underneath |
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  Guest chapter 21 . 6/20 your livejournal page link isnt working idk what to do i wanna read the chapter but something is broken. |
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/20 wait it says chapter 19 is "alchemy club" but it isnt titled that? is this some kind of mistake? im really confused... |
| Edward chapter 21 . 5/19 Can not access live journel |
 Noxvae chapter 33 . 6/25/2019 I really, really loved it. Thanks. |
| Psychohalcyon chapter 5 . 4/16/2019 Realistically... People would have found out this was the fullmetal alchemist in a heart beat. I know you said you don't write that "seriously" but even in a situation like this... Golden eyes and hair... Plus an automail arm? Literally only one person in the whole of Amestris fits this description. It's too unbelievable. It feels like I'm reading about Superman and his eyeglass disguise. It would have made better sense to at least give Edward gloves - I mean he even wears them in cannon. I don't think him wearing black gloves would have mattered so much for the school uniform. Also wish he wasn't wearing such a granny skirt. Thigh-high black socks would have more than covered the length of his automail leg. Otherwise, your story is very fun! |
| oogilywoogily chapter 22 . 12/30/2018 ...this part isn't on LJ... |
| Killua Lawliet chapter 2 . 7/27/2018 YES. JUST YES |
| Killua Lawliet chapter 27 . 7/27/2018 Roy's bamf moment is totally awesome |
| Killua Lawliet chapter 24 . 7/27/2018 Ahh a combo of 1 and 2 with a twist...so close |
| Killua Lawliet chapter 20 . 7/27/2018 Ok I have two-maybe three theories 1)Emily likes Ed. 2) Emily's crush is dead(or someone she knows) and she's planing on attempting human transmutation or 3) the lacrosse team really is evil. Personally I think 2 is most likely but idk maybe not |
| NerdyMcNerderson chapter 15 . 6/12/2018 I DONT KNOW WHO TO BE ANGRY AT MORE BECAUSE THEYRE ALL IDIOTS! |
| NerdyMcNerderson chapter 11 . 6/12/2018 Oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no |
| evergreen-icy chapter 11 . 5/22/2018 I'd love to have Ed as a girlfriend too. |
| Guest chapter 22 . 6/17/2017 Thank really love it |
| LoreenaLaufeyson chapter 33 . 5/17/2017 :) |
