This is great. I love Faramir as the dominate.

This was extremely well-written. Most yaoi writers (or most amatuer writers in general) tend to write on brainless sex... something that's a huge no no for me.

You, on the other hand, have accomplished what few have managed to. ;) While I do not like and definately do not encourage promiscuity or homosexuality, I'd repeat what I "said" earlier. This was extremely well written. The entire story was beautifully choreographed and the writing was easy to follow.

Just one problem. In these sort of stories, they tend to give the impression of a literature text sort of thing (at least in my opinion). Thus, the usage of the word "cock" would be quite crude and tends to spoil the entirety of it. You could have used other words and phrases such as, "his tumescence" or something. But then again, it's up to you. ;)

Overall, I'd give the writing at 9.5 out of 10. ) (Not that you asked me to give u a rating... but I really do think your writing's good. _)

I liked this story.

Nice. Very good.

I like! This is acually I'm logged on as my sister...this is great! I expected Faramir to be on the bottom but this was a pleasant surprise! I LOVE when Aragorn is...well you know! lol. Write some more stories with this pairing! You're good at it! Feel free to email me! I love talking to authors about their stories! ~byez!