HOW COULD YOU GIVE UP ON THIS STORY?! WHAT IN THE SEVEN CIRCLES OF HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?! I'm extremely mad rite now.

Great story, just wished to see a chapter version of the ending...i wanted to see zim,s children :(

so I don't remember reviewing for the final time, I say it was a solid-ish ending kinda like one of those montage ending this was a great read all the same I enjoyed it thanks for at least attempting to end your fic. it was much appreciated and I wish you the best of luck on your futire fics.
Later Daze

Now that this is even more Badass then ever i love that

this is so badass i love it

Zim? A spy? Are you kidding me? He's, like, the loudest, most noticeable and over-dramatic person in the universe. He can't DO subtle. It's just not in his nature.

Oh, and Gaz will always have purple hair. Blue's her brother's thing. You cannot convince me otherwise.

Let me guess, Reb is short for Rebelle? Gaz is a bit out of character, as is Zim, but it's not nearly as horrible as some other IZ five I've suffered through. Might want to work on your word organization, though. I have a feeling spell check has something to do with this, but it's just slightly difficult to figure out what you try to communicate sometimes. Could use a bit more insanely comedic and random dark humor, but the absence of that doesn't distract from the main ... storyline, I guess. Flashback's a bit off, might want to work on the seperation between thoughts and diologue. Other than that, it's fantastic.

I'd say that is the perfect ending. I'm also a "forgets my stories in favor of other stuff" girl, so I understand. I remember seeing this ages ago! Where has the time gone!

Hi! This is really interesting so far. Only issue I have is that sometimes you switch from third person to first person for no reason. At first you write like you're the narrator telling the story, but then you end up writing like the characters themselves are telling the story instead of the narrator. Sorry, it's just me being knit picky. Other than that, it's great and I really like it!

wow just wow I really liked this hope that you are able to make wore when you can that would be cool. I hope you don't go cold turkey on this story and give up on it well anyway thank you for the read and I look forward to more of your work god sir.
Later Daze

I seriously love this story Mr Johnny sir XD

I got it Pfft would be funny if zim met Billy though HA

Ok question who is nny is he JHONNY or something

Great job Mr JHONNY sir I like your story

This is amazing and I will kill you if you don't continue writing like this, got it? Hunt you down and kill you. (no hard feelings:D)