Aw, Riku always knows just what to say to add to a moment. XD

I probably shouldn't be readin this in the God early hours of the morning, but this made me laugh. I could actually see it happening, too. Fantastic job.

Oh jeeze. That made me laugh :D I love the last four lines - the whole thing, really. (heart)

Aww! Why the hell haven't I reviewed this? It's been on my favorites for who knows how long. XD Sosososo adorable. It definately made me smile fondly. :]

Oh my. O_o I had read this FOREVER ago! More then once, it was so funny. Like, a year ago, maybe! last summer! I can't believe I never reviewed.

I'M SORRY!

Anyway, I lvoed this one-shot. _ LOVED IT. It made me giggle and twitch, a nice combination... at times. Not good if you're, like, chopping vegetables or something with a sharp knife. X3

Anyway, yes! Lovely lovely lovely! _

Haha. Sora. With a touch of ADD and violent tendencies. You've seemed to have hit the nail on the head. I liked this. It was cute, and the length was appropriate for how this came across. If you had made it longer - it just would've been rambling. Not that rambling's a bad thing, but in this case - you didn't need it.

You really portrayed Sora well here. I liked it.

Be good, do good, and keep doing that good thing you do.

Cheers,

Your Friendly Neighbourhood Bisexual.

Look, it's a dead body... !

It's a girl...

Let's poke her boobs!

Morbid, am I not?

lovly.

I've never even PLAYED kingdom hearts, and I loved it. You rock, and this was the best oneshot, thus far, I've ever read.

O M G. lmao. This was the greatest oneshot i've read in a while _ You have a really nice flare for writing, and I loved the over stressing on the fact that Riku was a jerk. Right until the end. Nice job..really :)

So amusing and so sweet! You have a wonderfully pellucid style of writing.

I really liked this, and I barely read shonen-ai fanfiction as it is (or KH, for that matter, but this story may have just made me reassess my neglect of that fandom). I was immediately captured by Sora's perceptive, yet easily distracted, narrative ... as well as by Riku's cool, composed, and yet just a taad concerned reaction. This line, especially, made me laugh out loud: "And while Riku's expression is stunned, it isn't *quite* stunned enough. So Sora gives him the finger, because Cid never was a good influence on *anyone,* and wishes he really *had* paid more attention to some of the more colorful expletives he'd witnessed, since this occasion definitely calls for some razzmatazz." Greatness.

~Cel

Cute! )

It's s really nice story!

I think you captured both of the characters really well!

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I don't know if this was the effect you were going for, but that was absolutely adorable. You did a very good job of not making Sora seem stupid, just easily distracted, as well as making Riku the loveable jerk he is. Way to many fanfictions are out of character, so kudos for keeping Riku and Sora in character! (Gives you many cookies.)

Aw, violent ADD sora is so adorable. But seriously, this was wonderful and I love the way you portrayed Sora. It was so on point and I loved it.

This is cute. I like the POV because it's much like Sora's mind and yet Riku's personality is very clear through it. And I like the way you wrote Riku. Very Riku.