Cute

I LOVED reading this.
It took me back to the movie just enough to keep it close to the original feel of the movie, all Henson like, and was just different and adult enough to tickle me all the way through.
Well done.
and the end was fantastic too.

oooh... nice change in perspective. :D

Awe! So sweet and cute! I loved his sister and her relationships. I love how Toby knows who he is and what he wants, (I also want to know if he ever does grow up to get Delaine...lol)
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I liked it.

Very well written. I loved it.

You really are a wonderful writer, I hope to buying your novels soon. Thank you for the wonderful story.

This was the sequel to the Labyrinth.
I seriously cannot read another fan fiction now, because this was it. I was bawling at the end.

The story could have expanded on the plot a bit more, & this could have been a very long story, but my god this was incredible.

Thank you so much for writing this.

This was just an absolutely wonderful story. While I adore it as it is written, I can't but help feel that if you had wanted to flesh it out a bit more and draw out the suspense and emotion, it could easily become an epic length tale in its own right. You have laid out all the elements very well. The imagery is there, but it is not quite as all encompassing as I kept feeling it could be. Like watching a glass of wine held tipped on the apex of its stem, just before it spills over. Beautiful story, and one I have added to my favorites.

Crystalline Dreams

Such a fun ride. Cute end-er... beginning.

I loved this and that the titles of each chapter were a David Bowie song or lyric.

I enjoyed. Thank you for posting.

The song is shadow man im pretty sure

In honor of (the probably mostly unofficial) Fanfic Writers Appreciation Day I have been going through my list of favorite stories and dropping a note to the authors (since I've been terrible at writing reviews at the time they were written). I just wanted to let you know that this remains one of my all-time favorite Labyrinth stories. I love the plot, the romance . . . even the original characters. And I love that you wrote a sequel so I could revisit this world in 2 different stories. Thanks for all your hard work.

nice.