So adorable... but the last line killed me..I actually screamed no in a higher pitch I thought possible and me like "what's happening?!"

Aww, he smiled! That is so CU-

Eh? No Zexy! That last sentence tears me apart just a bit. :'(

But really, apart from that last sentence, it was a cute, interesting, and heartfelt story. Good job.

Me reading the sroty.

"Awww thats so cute...wow its should be continu-WHAT!...*quite for a moment*Geuss it wont be contiued"

Ohmygosh :D I loved this! It was amazing but i almost cried at the end! Great story! Go demyx and zexy!

that's so cruel

XD guess you never heard of me I am a HUUUUUUGE Zemyx fan!

XD you are one epic writer

DX Axel should be killed A LOT earlier than he was for killing Zexy! DX

I could cry...it's so deep! Even Demyx. Even Demyx...

Keep writing!

What the heck, ending it with that last, horrible sentence... Are you some kind of evil person? *bursts into tears*

well the last sentence kind of stabbed me in the gut..

. . . WHAT!

I loved it. But. Seriously.

It was really, incredibly, adorably, cute.

Until the last line.

;~;

Aww, I loved this story! It was nicely written, awesome work. :)

...Now I'm depressed! Poor Zexy!:(

TTTT epic~

That was just perfect... I can see how this could start all the Demyx x Zexion stuff out there...

The end just killed me... At least Zexion got to be a little happy before he died, but why did he have to die? He was my favorite... but, it wouldn't be right if he lived, like I said... it was perfect.

OMG that was AWESOME! I know I'm not the only one who has said that but its just so true! It was really good and the last part just... I wasn't expecting it, *sob* well done! and look, its so good that its the first fanfic on the list! so again, awesome job! 3

-Chichistar