Some total of the story is ...
Harry is a greedy pervert who wants both Hermione and Ginny...
Hermione is a possessive b***h so she wants both Harry and Ron for herself...
Ron is jealous ba****d.. Draco was right abt him being taking Harry's left over or used...

Actually enjoyed this far more then the actual fifth book and was curious if you've done your own continuation to the series if so id love to read them.

hey, this is an interesting story and you write well
i had a lot of fun with harry explaining to sandy human concepts

An amazing start to the story.

Hate to break it to you, but Ginny is short for Ginevra, not Virginia.

Wow! You called almost the whole backstory of Snape two years before it was released! This is an amazing fic.. can't believe it was written 17 years ago?

This is a wonderful story !

Ch 32:

Well, you certainly followed the theme of a death at the end of the year. I can't say that I'm sad it wasn't Sirius instead - Harry needs him more than Dudley. The whole thing is a real mindfuck (can I curse on here?) with the Congeniality Charm.

Great Story! Read the whole series.

Ch 31

I knew something bad was going to come of him not reading Dudley's letter. :(

I hope Harry can figure out something to help that poor foreman with a shattered leg!

Ch 30

I LOVE your version of the ministry, honestly better than canon. JK often takes a Roald Dahl-esque style that is very silly and dissonant with the sometimes very serious tones of the story she crafted. Your approach to the ministry feels closer to high fantasy.

Mrs Weasley can be really fickle sometimes.

Oh, you really subverted the 'eternally loving mother Narcissa' trope here! It makes sense, since at the time you wrote this, we didn't know she would lie to Voldemort for Draco's sake. But there's so many fics where she pics Draco's side when he goes against Lucius; it is nice to read something different for a change!

Ch 29

Was it this chapter or the previous one where you used the phrase 'a brace of deer'? What an image!

I like the comparison of Ron preferring to kiss Snape than disclose the subject of his row with Parvati. JK always used silly comparisons like that, like Percy not recognizing a joke if it danced naked wearing Dobby's tea cozy.

I'm not awake and alert enough to comment on the more substantive aspects of this story right now - but I think they are excellent. I suspected Draco was going to doublecross his father. That climax was really something - one thing after another: birthday, rape scene, kidnapping and death eater induction, doublecrossing, chasing Wormtail, and the giants. I did find it a bit OOC that Harry was not in such a rush to get back and find out the aftermath of the whole situation, but I prefer him to be more quick on the uptake - it is great that he realized Malfoy was acting the whole time. I think canon Harry might have been slower and not figured it out, which is dumb.

OK I really am quite tired. Goodnight!

additional comments from ch 25:

I love how your Ginny is very fiery and comfortable with sex, but knows her limits as well - totally canon and fanon! That line about not being a prude, but not being mentally ready to have sex - spot on!

IS ABERFORTH A DEATH EATER?!

and ch 26:
Wow, this is where it gets good. I tried to write a Hogwarts drug addiction story once, and it was BAD. I love how well this was handled - I suspected something was up with Neville, but I had not put it together.

Ch 25

I couldn't quite follow the parallels between Clan MacGregor and Clan Lamont in history and present day. Who was being blamed for killing who? It was not actually Sirius' fault that Lily and James died.

And wow, Arabella as a separate character from Mrs. Figg! I remember those days when I had not noticed that, and I think a friend of mine had - when we were waiting for the fifth book to come out. She had put it together. She also put together that Hagrid was off to negotiate with the giants, which I also had not figured out.