*Snickers at Gibbs' line* Aww...poor insecure Tony. Great work. Catch ya on the flip side.

omg...this is funny as hell! i seriously was reading this, w/ my eyebrow raised inquisitively, and my eyes widened at that last line right before i started giggling uncontrollably. i love it!

sincerely,

the Evil Jenyus XD

waxing of butts... eouch!

It is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer.

sorry but im not well rouded.

haha cute :)

I shuddered when I read the last line. Poor, poor Tony! Gibbs is pure evil. Very amusing story.

Ouch! I can just imagine Gibbs carrying out his threat LOL! Loved it!

Lynn

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