This was entertaining, nice job! I'd like to see more, ya can't end it here, I gotta know what happens!

Still don't know what's going on but, it's well written and I like it, so update soon! :D

Ack! Cliffy! Come on Jan - Mag - Ugh... What do I call him!

YO-0-O-0-O-0-O. yeah, this is Whizman, and I read your story, Craig. i think that his name should be Janus, and not Magus, Janus is a way cooler name it rhymes with anus. the way I talk about these stories, (is it chrono Trigger?) there's going to be like tons of hardcore fans adding me to lists of people to kill. ANYHOO, you spelled stomach wrong. and castan should be cast an. jeez. oh, and don't forget to hit the cock! like in gym tomorrow! YOU CAN'T FORGET.

hey this is kinda okay, poor janus. I would have thought that he would have been a bit more tough-ish I mean like in the game I always had the impression that Janus always thought of himslef being better than others or something like that err yeah I just confused meself.

Um...Do another! Magus is cool!

YO sup CRAIG yeah this is EARL and I registered for this JUST so I could leave a review for your stuff...yeah I'm splured off that you didn't use my suggestions...maybe you should consider that for your next storyish thang. ANYHO...we should go to the mall.

Otay, hey I'm first to review mah friend anyway continue to read my stories and hopefully you continue yours.

Lve

DG-M