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Hinata for shure!

i hope you continue writing this storie im new and i love your stories already ;D

i vote for naru/ino :D

LOL WOW WHo do you think i am ? im not jesus XDD CLASSIC!

You need to update this so I know if Sasuke got over his jealousy

good story so far, cant wait to see more. btw... WHEN WILL MORE COME T.T i so want more!

I just wanted to know if this is a Naruto/Harem Fanfic? If it is, I will be adding it to My Naruto C2: A Hero's Harem.

ahahahah he saw the Icha Icha Pararise Series book

ohhohoho you have a pretty good start of a story

God, it had been so long from the last update that I had forgotten the whole fic... xD Thx for the UD, i hope you'll UD ASAP... thx...

The song lyrics has absolutely nothing to do with your fic... It's just a way to tell you that I was here and that I loved your story...

... just song lyrics, don't mind me...

Mama please stop cryin'

I can't stand the sound

Your pain is painful

and it's tearin' me down

I hear glasses breaking

As I sit up in my bed

I told god you didn't mean

Those nasty things you said

You fight about money

about me and my brother

And this I come home to

This is my shelter

It ain't easy, growin' up in World War 3

Never knowin' what love could be

You'll see, I don't want love to destroy me

Like it has done my family

Can we work it out?

Can we be a family?

I promise I'll be better

Mommy I'll do anything

Can we work it out?

Can we be a family?

I promise I'll be better

Daddy please don't leave

Daddy please stop yellin'

I can't stand the sound

Make mama stop cryin'

'Cause I need you around

My mama she loves you

No matter what she says it's true

I know that she hurts you

But remember I love you too!

I ran away today, ran from the noise

Ran away (ran away)

Don't wanna go back to that place

But don't have no choice, no way

It ain't easy, growin' up in World War 3

Never knowin' what love could be

But I've seen, I don't want love to destroy me

Like it did my family

Can we work it out?

Can we be a family?

I promise I'll be better

Mommy I'll do anything

Can we work it out?

Can we be a family?

I promise I'll be better

Daddy please don't leave

In our family portrait

We look pretty happy

Let's play pretend,

and act like it Comes naturally

I don't wanna have to split the holidays

I don't want two addresses

I don't want a stepbrother anyways

And I don't want my mom to have to change her last name

In our family portrait

We look pretty happy

We look pretty normal

let's go back to that

In our family portrait

We look pretty happy

Let's play pretend,

act like goes naturally

In our family portrait

We look pretty happy

We look pretty normal

let's go back to that

In our family portrait

We look pretty happy

Let's play pretend, act like it

Comes naturally

(can we work it out)

(can we be a family)

(promise ill be better)

(mom ill do anything)

(can we work it out)

(can we be a family)

(promise ill be betta)

(dady please dont leave)

In our family portrait

We look pretty happy

We look pretty normal

let's go back to that

In our family portrait

We look pretty happy

We look pretty normal

let's go back to that

Daddy don't leave... daddy don't leave

Daddy don't leave

turn around please

remember that the night you left you

took my shining star?

daddy dont...daddy dont leave

daddy dont leave

dont leave us here alone

Mom l'll be nicer

I'll be so much better

I'll tell my brother

I won't spill the milk at dinner

I'll be so much better

I'll do everything right

I'll be your little girl forever

I'll go to sleep at night

Interesting fic, are you going to continue it?

Awesome. Although I have to say:

Where the heck are you man! You haven't updated in 8 months. Hurry up and write. YOU may have a life, but I sure as hell don't. So update so I have something to do.

So yeah. You are a great writer and I love both your stories. Also, if you want a whole lot more rveiws and stuff, try putting your stories on TONFA (The Oringinal Naruto Fanfiction Archive).