wasnt they once human any how if ichigow chain was cut then hes dead and his father papa bear a shingami so hes not human anymore but a human soul

You need to stop writing you take far fucking to fucking long to do one fucking thing this is really fucking bad

Have you ever seen bleach I mean really watched the anime or manga

Makes no fucking sense

Don't write a good fan fic if you're not gonna finish it.

That was great! Fuck what other think just keep writing and thanks again.

Very funny and it made me laugh a lot I can't wait to read future chapters

btw...have you read inuyasha fanfiction...'sesshomaru a path of destiny'.it about kikyou and seshho pairing... its really amazing you know...it might help you...his writing is so mature...i know nothing about language..but this one is cool..you can try to read it...it worth it...ichiruki is my favorite tooo...i dont give a damn about shipping and sort...im not some lunatic shipper..

btw...have you read inuyasha fanfiction...'sesshomaru a path of destiny'.it about kikyou and seshho pairing... its really amazing you know...it might help you...his writing is so mature...i know nothing about language..but this one is cool..you can try to read it...it worth it...i dont give a damn about shipping and sort...im not some lunatic shipper...but ichiruki is my favorite...hahaa

whaaaa...look like you dont update recently...its 2014 already...plissssss...im longing to read your next chapterrrr.. this is amazing... i feel curious when read it..good job...ichigo really suit perfectly with rukia..and you see it dont you...rukia new look...she pretty...much better from the old one...and she achieve bankai too...averything turn white...she looks formidable...awww...jaw drop...i hope this fanfic still ongoing...you so talented

wahhhhh...updateeeeeeeee

niceeeeeeeeeeee doneeeeeee! gambateeeee...updateeee plisssss

love this chapter...woot woott...so sweeettttt... too much sugar...awwww...im histeria...nice chap...realllyyyy gambatteeee..im looking forward for your update...

kyaaaaaa so sweeeeetttttttttt...im meltingggggg...you are talented one arent you...keep goingggg...i love to read your fanfic...updateeeeeeee

awwwww byakuya is just tooo cute with his glareee..well rather cold..ichigo and rukia is just too adorable.. awwwww...lost my mind...btw...you got amazing writing skilll...updateee yeahhhhhh...