lol, nice work... I was expecting Kai to start convulsing in agony at the mere thought of Tyson taking care of him, but u did a good job, I liked ur way too . Twas good.

yeah, this story is wortha second chapter

I loved it! A second chapter would be good. What does Tala want with the beach? I think it was so VERY cute!

hey i would like you to make a second chap to this story. you know you could even make a story out of this fanfic. i mean it could always be a death fic.{um i dont like death fics} [never mind] but this could be a good story fanfic. and i hope that you get to write somemore to this fanfic. thanks for writtein this fanfic and i hope that you have a good easter day next week. good bye:D

please do a second chapter! you kinda left an opening when you said tala was planning something on the beach so now im curious! it was very sweet good job!

hoshicat _

plz plz plz do a sequel, or a second chapter _i loved it!

Aw! That was so cute! I loved it! It's so sweet! Some parts even remind me of myself. - Not like in a relationship but just me regularly...Though...It does make me think of my crush. - Awesome job!

i thought that this story was really cute... *smiles sheepishly*

TALA and TYSON of all pple? *giggle* oh well... A SECOND CHAPTER WOULD BE CUTE! I wanna see what tTala wanted in the beach... *imagination goes WILD*

Hey... Awesome fic.. Its good by itself and making a 2nd chapter wouldn't effect it. But considering how crazy you put Rei, I'd like to see what else comes up. Lol... and ur SO lucky... KH2 hasn't came out where I live yet :( Good luck with future fics and with the game.

that is so cute. good work

3 Aweshum! Luved the dialogue, and the idea of Rei asking that question... You should totally do a sequel, or a second chapter!