Good enough for scrap paper for the kitty litter box.

Musicel

Hm, hiatus? I think not. I think you should update. What do you need, a push, a prod, an electrical pole through the inspiration center of your brain? Or do you just need inspiration? Whatever you need, I won't mind providing it. This fic is far too good to be left alone, even at one chapter, and doesn't half the reviews telling you how awesome it is it deserves. I will be adding this to my story alerts in hopes you'll update, because I'm being very honest when I say this story has some serious potential.

This is really amazing! I love how the hate and disdain is being questioned and almost somewhat mocked by the actual fascination they hold for each other. I love the way you wrote this, it's so thrilling and intriguing, I feel like you captured their personalities perfectly. I love the slight arrogance and feeling of supremacy Erik displays.

I really loved the little passage about love being a thief and look but don't touch.

It feels so realistic that Raoul still feels haunted by Erik, and that something more than the natural reaction to the traumatic experience in the lair has come to it.

This was absolutely magnificent I think, I really enjoyed it incredibly much! I so wish you'd continue, but it also is an amazing piece on its own.

Thankyou so much for this! I really cherish it.

BTW I really do not want to bother you so of course you don't have to reply to this, I was wondering if perhaps you know some good Erik/Raoul stories that are out there/here?

I really would not just ask like that, but... I actually found your ffn account because I saw the link in your signature at POTO and I remember you mentioning there that you find slash stories interesting so I thought perhaps you know a few good ones. I'm really sorry if I'm bothering you with this!

Thankyou again so much for sharing this!

This is really good...I can't wait for more!

...wow. This is amazing, and I love it. You portray Erik and Raoul perfectly, theres a lot of emotion coming from Erik, and a lot of deep thoughts from Raoul. I can only hope the two meet sometime soon. I'm loving the idea that Raoul is still partially afraid or aware of the 'phantom' and Erik is stalking him. It's a good plot, a really good plot, lol. But anyway, I'm praying, literally praying, that you'll update soon since it appears you haven't in a while. This seems amazing and your style of writing makes it all the more addictive. Please hurry! :P

promising ! i like the way, erik watches raoul ... and raoul thinks of erik :)

please update soon ? *begging* i can't wait to read more ! :)

*hugs*, bye, Blackie ..

Interesting start. Can't wait to see a bit more. Love the long-ish chapters. Very satisfying.

hmm .. very interesting ... i look forward to an update! :)

Although this is also a powerful short story on it's own, I really hope that you'll write more. You have got me completely hooked.

So has Erik finally gone a bit over the edge? DId he loose that little bit of sanity that he had? I like the premise of your story. Can't wait for more.

Enteresting. And, as usual, excellently written! _

Ghostie.

I love you.

You are insanely gifted! I can't wait to see where you're going to take this. It looks fantastic so far! Erik was perfectly creepy, it gave me shivers.

Keep it up!

An intriguing beginning with nice clear writing, good evocation of scene and emotional tone. I have a feeling Raoul's life is going to get very complicated very quickly. Can't wait...

An interesting beginning... a thin line between love and hate? This is exceedingly well-written and both Erik and Raoul seem completely in character and intriguing thus far! Looking forward to more!