I loved the drama, the ferosity! The story was amazingly written! Wondivwa!

Very cool. Rather bitter for April, but she did show it throughout the books. great job!

Although the details of April and senna's relationship are not entirly accurate you managed to capture the essesnce of their hatred for one another. Perhaps it wasn't intentional but i particularly aprechiate forshadowing in the refrence to Senna's destruction.

Oooh, that was really good, although from a really long time ago . . . you do great with the anger.

Interesting... amazing how much things have changed from book 2 until the end of the series. I took it the other way ::points to her Everworld fic from Senna's POV::... where Senna felt like it was always April stealing the spotlight, but I wrote it towards the end of the series rather than the beginning.

Wow interesting. Hmmmm...I don't think it's entirly accurae though, like her family favors Senna over April but hey! What do ya know! It's a fullfilled prophecy! Dude I just realized that...hmmmm...I give it a narf.

It was pooey

YAY! I cannot stand Senna! Go April!

WOW.. I only read the 1st in the Everworld series but it was great. And I think this describes April-Senns relation perfectly.

Nice.

definately in character. first one, eh? Now I have that Madonna song 'Beautiful Stranger' stuck in my head. Damn catchy Madonna songs...

o.O Never ever heard of Everworld...but that was a powerful fic. Slightly short, but who gives? One question, however. Does the main character only like Jalil because he won't fall to Senna's charms? Or is she in love with him? You have made me thoroughly hate Senna, which is hard to do with a character I've just heard about. Cool...

Hey, that story is cool... very real.

But: I never read EverWorld.. but I like Animorphs, and I know something about EverWorld *smile*, thats all.

::applauds:: I think you capture April's feelings very well.