| Reviews for The Chemicals Between Us |
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   didit chapter 2 . 9/30/2017 greaaat... you make me cry |
| LibraOfSlytherin chapter 2 . 9/10/2017 Oh my lord when Hermione was talking about how he can't see with out his glasses, all I could see in my head was that scene from My Girl; when Veda had a break down in front of Thomas J's casket in the middle of his funeral...and now I'm crying |
| LibraOfSlytherin chapter 2 . 9/10/2017 Oh my lord when Hermione was talking about how he can't see with out his glasses, all I could see in my head was that scene from My Girl; when Veda had a break down in front of Thomas J's casket in the middle of his funeral...and now I'm crying |
| Mistress-Cinder chapter 8 . 3/12/2017 They are both so fragile in their own way. Handle With Care... |
| Mistress-Cinder chapter 2 . 3/12/2017 Ouch! That tore my heart out! |
| Mistress-Cinder chapter 1 . 3/12/2017 That was the most tragic first chapter I ever read. Ouch my poor heart is broken! |
| delicatecherry chapter 1 . 4/25/2016 I read some of your first chapter. It was great. I really want to continue reading. But there's this very little very unimportant detail that annoys me. When you're writing the dialogue you put a space after opening the double quotation marks and one before ending it. I just can't read. I don't know why that matters it just does. If you one day change this, please let me know! :) |
| OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 11/22/2015 Awe so sad and before they even got Married |
| Guest chapter 40 . 5/13/2015 This story was nice up until "LET PUT SOME ACTION INTO THIS BITCH!" part, really? it was so well written with out adding shit like that, there interactions there development were perfect! and then it was like this needs more action! LET MICHAEL BAY THE SHIT OUT OF IT! why? it did not need all the extra attack of the evil resurrect bad wizard so BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH Seriously it didn't need it, every thing was going sooo well, hermione learning to cope with the death of her love, learning to let go relearning how to love, it was going sooooo freaking well, why did you put the action? to make there relationship more meaningful? have to prove there love with some GRANDIOSE ACT come on Last chapter i read, i only kept reading in the hopes it would get back on track or better and to be honest i just skimmed trough these, and from what i got is the same old shit as other fics. What a waste of such a unique idea. a deep meaningful and down right interesting story dragged down by ACTION! ADVENTURE! EXCITEMENT! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/3/2015 Overly dramatic, annoyingly so. |
| Yes girl chapter 14 . 9/17/2014 Kk |
| liljennmartin chapter 42 . 12/27/2013 Amazing story...great writing...thoroughly original! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/5/2013 man i cried |
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/20/2013 Amazing beginning so far. Currently finished chapter 2 u did bring me to cry. So moved, amazing emotion. MORE EMOTION PLZ THANKSS |
| trisgrangerdeen chapter 1 . 8/1/2013 the flashbacks! :( (harry/hermione) I'm crying over them :( |
