Does Anakin and Padme make it out?! I was getting all wrapped up in this story lol. I just hope that if you update this story I hope that you let it end happy with Anakin, Padme and Leia making it out alive.

This is actually pretty cool. Hope you update someday. :D

Alrighty...while there's definitely some elements that I like in this story, it really seems far too disjointed. You skip from event to event, the characters' personalities and convictions changing almost as fast as their wardrobes. There's plenty of good stuff to be had, but it's all so isolated, it doesn't seem to do any good.

You certainly have a way of picking chapter names...emetophobia, necrophobia...Le Francaise for Halo.

I thought Vader and Anakin had merged. Why the continued reference to the two as individuals? Enjoyed the face off though, especially in that you didn't give Anakin some amazing victory when Sidious clearly had the greater power.

Strange, what with the dual personality. I'm not liking how easily Anakin/Vader "turned" to the light, though with the children it makes a good deal more sense than Anakin suddenly becoming a homicidal maniac.

Good flow of action and description, though I find it hard to believe that no one sensed that little army marching through their doorway.

cool

hmm very intresting chapter i am really enjpying reading this please up[date again soon!

yoda and obiwan are a disgrace true balance is to balance both the dark side and light side

enjoying this story. like your Anakin. was really hoping the younglings were going to make it but alas. hope to see more soon

This is a great story. I usually don't read stories with this 'theme', but for some reason, I clicked this one. It's great, please update soon! You're an amazing writer!

This Is by far the best Fan Fic I've ever written I hope you find the time to write more cause I cabn't wait for the next parts of these stories

wow...

Just catching up with the rest of your story. Pretty good so far. You've nailed Anakin, I like your version of him as this "balanced" non-Jedi/non-Sith warrior. Like to see more of Palps, though...

Is Fett dead? Quite a cliffie there! lol! BTW, the word is spelled Mandalorian, with an I. I got a copy of "The Mandalorian Armor". The book stinks, but I'm pretty sure of the word. ;-)

I was just wondering, but didn't the Jedi decide not to train Luke and Leia at an early age so their Force signature couldn't be sensed by Vader and the Emp? You've gone out on a limb here, but I'm sure you know what your doing. Keep it up and good luck with everything else my friend, I'm there for you.