Reviews for Bad Luck
scarlettHuntress chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
i have no idea how you made something so short and pretty uneventful so damn good, but you did. have a... angsty Cloud? ...yeh, i like! [The fic, that is, but Cloud's good as well :p]
manga-ghost chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Wow!

I loved this, it really evoked Cloud's thoughts and emotions, and I really felt for the guy. *sniff* Great job!

Cyas! *faves*