| Reviews for A camping trip |
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  Jessica32 chapter 5 . 3/30/2002 Please continue I want to read more! |
| liz chapter 5 . 1/31/2002 add more val! |
| I'm not tellin chapter 5 . 7/22/2001 Kool story, really funny, and Tyler is so sweet(and he's MINE MINE ALL MINE)Hurry and write chapter 6. |
 Scarlet182 chapter 5 . 7/18/2001 It would be funny if the bottle lands on Hank. You have to continue this :) |
| Julie chapter 5 . 7/17/2001 Hey that was pretty good. Im me again sometime ok? Bye bye |
| Sarah Summers chapter 5 . 7/17/2001 Great Story! Write More! It land on Jamie! J/C are my favorites! |
| Momo Claus chapter 4 . 6/23/2001 Um... okay. I like this story a lot. A story with T/V romance is a good story. Period. GOOD STORY! |
| Scarlet182 chapter 4 . 6/19/2001 I like it :) I thought it was cute. Continue soon. |
| aricraze chapter 3 . 6/15/2001 AHHHH! She's IN THE WATER? OMG! I hope she doesn't die! Then Tyler would be soooo crushed. Well, of course, more than crushed. I mean, if his crush died... ahh. Wouldn't want to imagine. ANYWAYS. That was really really cool, it's really exciting to hear about their camping trip. That was really cute with Tyler wanting to kiss Val, but then she waking up. You did a great job with all the Tyler and Val parts in this story. I can tell I'll like this story lots since it has mainly a Tyler and Val plot... And the bears thing was great as well. I cracked up... "They came out and started acting like bears. The girls were in the tent freaking out." Hehehe, those lines were great. Anyways, I can't wait to see what happens next, especially with Val in the water... have fun on your camping trip! Maybe it'll inspire some more parts in this story! D |
| Scarlet182 chapter 3 . 6/15/2001 I can't believe she's in he water! If that were me I would wake up. I hope Tyler gets to her soon. At least she didn't drown...I don't think. Great story. |
| lulu chapter 2 . 6/11/2001 Hey! I LUV this! Please More! |
| The Littlest Angel way to lazy to sign in chapter 2 . 6/7/2001 more |
| karly chapter 2 . 6/6/2001 that was really great! i want to see what happens when they get there so you to hurry up with the next chapter. |
| aricraze chapter 2 . 6/6/2001 Hehe.. that was great! I especially liked the part when Tyler woke up Val, she covered herself and said her hair was messy, and Tyler commented that women always care about their hair (hey, that rhymed!). The scene where Val fell asleep on Tyler was also really cute. Anyways, this is a great idea, and I can't wait to find out what happens with all the characters, especially Val and Tyler (wink, wink). As for ideas, hmm. All I can really say is that Tyler and Val get to know each other a little more, and all five of them become better friends. Maybe there are some little scenes such as Val being frightened by a wild animal, Tyler "saves" her... cleanliness problems (the girls can't take showers or wear makeup... finding places in the woods to, like, you know, go to the restroom... things like that.) Basically, the trip can be sort of an adventure/romance story. It doesn't have to be like dramatic action, just some little nicks in the plans. Know what I mean? My only request though is that you put a lot of Val and Tyler mush so I can gush over it. I think you do always put a lot of Val/Tyler cool stuff, so that won't be a problem. Anyways, great job, I enjoyed reading this a lot. And I STILL love your dialogue. Hope you write chapter three soon! D |
| Scarlet182 chapter 2 . 6/5/2001 This is turning out great. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
