i almost understand

i sorta

YES YES I DO

AND IT REALLY TOUCHES ME!

woot

i love the last line

quote"and the swing still is swinging." unquote

this is so going on my favorites list

I love this story. It wasn't unnecessarily long or fancy it was simple simple and well written. And you wrote about something not everyone thinks about. I'm going to write one-shorts after I finish my Naruto story and I hope they turn out as powerful as yours.

-shyshi

p.s. sorry I couldn't critique anything or offer help I couldn't find anything. ;

that was good in a sad sort of way...but still a great read...good job

...wow.

:D GOOD JOB!

this is a combined review cuz green pigeon cant sign in rite now. well we both liked alot. it was really good and hopefull too.