Reviews for In the Dark
Pisceanreve chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
you use language so beautifully...I'm so jealous!
PisceanReve chapter 25 . 2/4/2011
I loved these!
PisceanReve chapter 17 . 2/4/2011
OOOoooh very nice! Especially at the end

dear diary I saved the world today

dear diary I destroyed the world today

Dear diary Sora saved the world today

and it's a bit sad to read too

also are you referring to the Crumbling Island they had planned to put in the game but didn't in KH as a final battle against Riku in a place that reflected Destiny Islands in darkness?

or are you talking about the end?

great drabbles/one shots so far!
Devil Lace chapter 17 . 9/7/2008
AH I picked a chapter randomly and got this lovely, smart, clever little drabble.

dear diary,

sora saved the world today.

WOW o.o

and then, I think i destroyed the world.

not my fault.

wow, amazing skitts!
Devil Lace chapter 2 . 9/7/2008
this is my absolute favorite of all the ones I read. it's SO beautifull written, so sad, and the itilizazed lines and the break quotes were amazing.

the in-game dialogue, awesome.

sad, beautiful, poetic, twisted, everything Riku is.

love it skittles!
SilverInkblot chapter 25 . 4/13/2008
Awesome, awesome, awesome chapter. Really creative, and perfectly executed. Your writing blows me away. Love times infinity.
Amy chapter 25 . 4/12/2008
So,I just read this entire thing..and I LOVED it. Made me sad though...poor Riku. He was always me favorite character,maybe my favorite of all the games I've played even. Anyway,good work.
Harriet Usher chapter 25 . 4/8/2008
Actually, I thought this last one was really good. I liked the way you described each of the princesses, but yet didn't mention their names. xD- and I can imagine 'Princess Riku.'

O_o.

(gets an image of Riku in a pink dress)

...

Disturbing...

Isilthrar
i AM the Random Idiot chapter 25 . 4/7/2008
Aww... Poor princess Riku. XD It was a good idea, and I think you did pretty well with it.

And this will be the last? D: ),: I'll miss it...

GOOD JOB TIMES ELEVENTY BILLION!
EstelleDusk chapter 25 . 4/7/2008
I loved these lines:

"Riku now knew he had been wrong.

He wasn't the knight.

He wasn't even good enough to play at being the villain. He'd been a puppet all along, hung by invisble thread and forced to do horrible things.

No. He was the bloody princess here, sat in his tower waiting to be rescued."

Heh, not the knight in shining armor, nor the villian with his black heart, but the princess in her tower. Geez, who wouldn't be depressed when they learned that they were the damsel in distress?
dawn in the fields chapter 25 . 4/7/2008
You are very very very awesome. o;

& I am totally in awe of your skillz~

Thank you for writing this & letting us read it!

-namikun
Shiva chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
well done!
SoulEaterDark chapter 24 . 1/31/2008
That was so cool! Sorry I didn't review earlier, I've been really busy, and guess what? I saw Marilyn Manson last night! *screams*

I loved this one though, I don't know what it is about this story, maybe that whole "In yo face!" thing that you have going for it, either way, I love it!

Great job, update soon, okay?
lamatikah chapter 24 . 1/27/2008
Aw x33.

See there, I give this story two smiles because it was good.

I want people to ask me if I had a good day.

I'll tell you what, the line "But, to keep everybody happy, Riku will be sad." made me EXCEPTIONALLY happy.

I was almost giddy.

reimei xx
Rehime chapter 24 . 1/23/2008
The wonderfully justified angst of Riku. I loved it.
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