| Reviews for Fragments |
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WyldClaw chapter 15 . 5/13/2011 awww. that is a wonderful way to end this fic |
WyldClaw chapter 3 . 2/12/2009 Was Frostfur (Brightheart's mom) or Speckletail looking down on them and smiling from starclan |
WyldClaw chapter 2 . 2/12/2009 Cute I bet this is EXACTLY what Cloudpaw thought when he first feel head over paws in love with brightpaw |
Inactive99999995 chapter 15 . 1/7/2009 Aww, these little one-shots are so cute D I love this couple, I'm glad someone is writing about them. There were a few little errors here and there, but nothing so serious that I can remember them now / I agree that the warriors series isn't nearly as good as it was during that first six-book set, yet I continue to follow it simply because some of my favorite characters are still alive. Even if this is the last chapter, they're all very good. ] |
Leopardheart chapter 15 . 12/9/2008 Aww, very sweet last chapter. I agree that the Warriors series is getting very complicated. The only reason I'm still reading them is because my brother still buys the books... Kinda sad. ( Anyway! It was sweet, I liked that Cloudtail was reassuring Brightheart about StarClan even though he doesn't believe in them. Great job, I really liked all these little drabbles. ) |
Anybody. Who am I chapter 13 . 11/13/2008 That chapter was...err..out of the blue? where the heck did you get that from? But ignore the critisim cuz that was good! xD This is worth reading! |
A Silent Beast chapter 1 . 8/10/2008 I love this pairing so much. BrightxCloud FOREVER. Thank you for writing such lovely stories. |
Gingerstar chapter 14 . 1/30/2008 I luffles this coulple!:DD i read all your chapters and they are so awesome! :P The only one i kinda don't get is 'twist' i just don't get what its about. But it's still AWESOME! :DD |
Frost Hobbit chapter 14 . 12/19/2006 Aww...cute, me likey! |
SFLP chapter 14 . 12/18/2006 ICE CREAM! Hi! That last review...duck! (flying pencils come toward us) DANG IT! THEY MISSED! When am i ever going to get rid of her? Anyway, The last review was 4 this chapter. and also, Ha! That was the longest review from any of your reviewers! I'm not greedy and all but we should get a special prize for this (last review was longest) maybe a room full of Brightheart and Cloudtail plushies? Please? Maybe Squirrely... here might ' accidentally slip out if you don't? lol, no im jus' jokin, good chappie, update! And don't you dare mock me Squirrely...! |
SquirrelyFlightyLeafyPooly chapter 11 . 12/18/2006 ICE CREAM! that ic-cream thing is just my trade-mark thing. I DON'T HAVE ISSUES BECAUSE Y MOMMY SAYS I'M SPECIAL! MY SHRINK SAYS I AM SPECIAL IN A WAY TO! DON'T SAY I HAVE PROBLEMS BECAUSE MY ANGER MANAGEMENT TEACHER SAID I ONLY HAVE TO CALM DOWN A BIT SO I ATTACKED HER WITH MY PENCILS OF DOOM! IF YOU SAY I HAVE PROBLEMS THEN MY PENCILS OF DOOM WILL ATTACK YOU AS WELL! ATTACK! (flying, very sharp pencils come flying toward you but you dodged them) THAT WAS JUST A WARNING! NOW I'LL GO BACK TO MY REGULAR VOICE! Ahem, anyway, you can call me S_F_L_P. You should make a chapter about how Cloudtail's spending so much time with Daisy and how Brightheart feels about it. NOW GIVE ME PLUSHIE OR MY PENCILS OF DOOM SHALL ATTACK AND I'LL CALL LAWYERS AND TELL THEM THAT YOU SAID THAT YOU OWNED WARRIORS AND YOU DIDN'T TAKE IT BACK! (calls lawyers and you hear a knock on the door) (stares at you with a look that says 'I have the advantage hear') I'LL TELL THEM TO GO TO YOUR ENEMY'S HOUSE IF YOU GIVE ME PLUSHIE! Stop it Squirrely_Flighty_Leafy_Pooly! Your scaring her! Squirrely... is my alter ego, I am S_F_L_P, the non-problematic version. I DON'T HAVE PROBLEMS! Whenever you see capital letters, it means that she's talking. That Daisy idea i was talking about is my idea so don't worry. Anyway, good chappie, update! GOOD CHAPPIE, UPDATE! (says in mocking voice) Shut-up Squirrely...! (shoves Squirrely... in cage) ok, hopefully she won't bother you for a while. ta ta for now (TTFN) |
SquirrelyFlightyLeafyPooly chapter 9 . 12/18/2006 ICE CREAM! You can eat ice-cream when you have braces! But only if it's a soft ice-cream. And don't you dare tell me that you don't like ice-cream cause if you do, then i'll have to load up my 2 by 4 and my bazooka with icy cold chocoalate bars that hurt 10 x worse then plushies! IMAGINE THE PAIN! lol! You may also be able to eat stuff like noodles and uh... mashed potatoes! YUMMY! good chappie! update soon! wait, you already madea new chapter! I'M GOING INSANE! AH! (runs away screaming insanely and out of no where appears in front of you and says) BYE! (Then runs away screaming insanely again! |
Doxeh chapter 14 . 12/18/2006 My friend, are you talking about Squirrelflight? Cuz if so, then I'd love a plushie or a million. Amazing stuff ya got there, keep it up! |
Saf Dawnheart chapter 14 . 12/18/2006 Oh, Brightheart, you naughty, naughty girl. *wags finger reprovingly* |
Frost Hobbit chapter 13 . 12/17/2006 This was pretty good. Sad... poor Brightheart. |