Again, hauntingly, ridiculously beautiful. I love it.

Strange, but nice nonetheless :)

Oh my gosh. That was some amazing writing!

That was beautiful. I love the way you've written it, and I think you've kept Hermione very much in character.

Absolutely beautiful. Magnificent portrayal of Hermione and take on the deep-and-meaningful emotional journey.

Just perfect.

I cannot begin to speak. That was incredible. I wish I could say more, but what more is there to say? It's indescribable, like Hermione's problem.

So very fitting. You stayed in character with Hermione very well. Her thoughts are perfectly her, and I loved how Ron fixes her problems. Great RHr. :-) Keep up the stories.

this is so beautiful. i loved it. a bunch.

Stunning. Just stunning.

And I hate this ship, so kudos to you!

love it

add to it

Your writing is captivating and your portrayal of Hermione is perfect. I can't express how much I enjoyed reading this piece.

the mind/soul distinction and resolution is so powerful here, also the recap of the emotional burden and blessing through all six books came out fantastic...really, really wonderful

Wow - lovely lovely story!

You are so good at characterization. I always seem to mess up with Hermione, making her seem too-much of something or other. Yet, you manage to do it perfectly.

very cute and sweet. a new take. most fic ahve love conquering all and drving evething away but this is a little more realistic in its portrayal of a soul torn in two by conflicting emotions that exist in impossible harmony. great subject matter

xxnightdwellerxx