I enjoyed the characterisation, even though I know it all ended reasonably well your story made me feel a little sad - so much Kureno lost. Thanks for sharing.

so sad! i'm litterally crying! OMG! it-it's a beautiful story!

good, but...akito is a girl. you didn't know?

the heart is all we follow but to see the other side

i like it

This was a really nice songfic! I love this song, so I was interested to see what you would do with it. I can definitely say that I enjoyed the story; it was well-written, and you had both Haru and Kureno make some really good observations about love and life in general. I also liked the fic because it could stand alone as a story, even if you didn't include the song.

Keep up the good work!

Wow! I really like this. I don't see a lot of FB stories like this one. Very nice.

This was really good, I like Kureno and the fact you had Haru and him talk was something I've never seen done before. I also thought the way you did this was well done for example the part

"unsuccessfully beating up the tree" was hilarious and a nice offset of the other emotions running at the time. I also thought the lin

"Even a bird in a cage hits the rails once in a while." was really deep. I liked it alot. Nice Jobe!

~Dolphin dreamer