Hello! I really really like all your stories and everything, but this is mostly do I can ask you a question. You wrote a story called Pure As Snow, right? I love it, it made me cry and I love it, but I can't find it anymore. I was hoping that you could please put it back up? (If you took it down for personal reasons or anything that's fine and you can ignore this, hope you're doing okay) Because I really like it and would very much appreciate it. Please and thank you! Xoxox

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This was such a good start, it has me so hooked. The way you portrayed his sadness and loneliness is so original. Others are so cliche and make me cringe. You are such a good writer. I only ask for one more chapter, just a satisfying end please. If not then you are truly evil! XD

I like the stories when Naruto finally stands has enough and doesn't allow his so-called teammates to walk over him.

you little BASTARD! YOU COULD AT LEAST PUT SOME KIND OF UNSPEAKABLE ACT IN THERE, OR AT LEAST LET TEAM 7 FIGURE OUT NARUTO'S PAST! NO FLUFF REQUIRED!

This means I really liked it, so don't take it the wrong way.

Can I please continue this if I give you credit ?

U should continue this. Its really good.

I seem to be on a trip down memory-lane.

Why...Why cant you continue...
Ok rude of me to say but...
I like Naruto fanfics when it shows HIS REAL pain..
Throught the whole anime. I felt pity.. and thankful. Thankful, I had attention. Pity, because he was hurting inside..but he always had a smile.
I like Naruto fanfics that show HIS REAL pain..
because it shows:
Be thankful. Be happy...
And Naruto is like a hero to me. It sounds silly I know. But..even though he is a fictional character. There are kids out there who have that pain. No the silly fox of course or anything. But the need for affection, attention, etc.
So, hadigato. Thank you for, writing this amazing story. :)

This story is amazing. Keep writing, you are amazing. It was so moving and I'm glad you are on this site. Great job.

I almost cried.

Okay, even if this is an old story, I'm still going to review, because this sad little one-shot touched me and made me cry. I'm glad Naruto finally stood up to Team 7 and let them see just how much they hurt him every time they insulted him, called him names, and ignored him. I felt the same way towards the rest of Team 7 when I first watched the original Naruto series, and I still feel the same way no matter how many times I watch it. Angry at how everyone has treated and continued to treat Naruto, how he had been neglected all his life, and disgusted by the people around him who became Naruto's "precious people". The fact that he cherished the people he did speaks volumes about just how desperate and lonely poor Naruto was all his young life.

I think people who like Naruto have probably had some similar experiences as he has, so we can empathize with him. People who are incapable of feeling compassion and empathy for Naruto are people that should be avoided at all costs.

I really hope that you continuethis story because this is really good. I love the plot and i love how you wrote it. It also seems that your not going to bash team seven just to get your point across. Seriously, please continue!

I think naruto should have said this to the others!

LOVED this one-shot ! :) :)