Oh...God... Imagine if they'd suspected Peter and made Remus the secret keeper! If only they'd done that! Well done, very realistic!

This is heartbreaking. Brilliantly written, loved it!

I really like this. It's interesting to read this and know that they are wrong, and that chances are, Peter only told them all this to put them off the scent of suspecting him...It seems likely that this might have happened. That's something else I like. This rampant suspicion, I just really like it.

so sad. so very very sad. but THAT is always how I imagined their last meeting together. i could just never write it

This was amazing. Impressive writing. Quite angst-filled, but it was brilliant. I never thought of it like that.

Crazy well written. I always wondered what James and Sirius did when they suspected Remus, and now I think I know. :D:D:D:D:D:D This i definatly going on my favorites.

...I'm going to cry...this fic made me so sad...It was fantastic writting and I really need some tissues right about now...OMG...I can't even BELIEVE how realistic this was...Fantastic work...okay, I really can't write more...I need to get a tissue...

-FJ-

That's so sad... Beautifully written... I loved it. I must add this to my favorites.

Erin ("Elphie")

That was really good. I enjoyed that a lot.

This is amazingly well written. Whenever people write about the marauders together, they focus on the humour point. Few manage to convey the emotions and you have brought out their sense of hurt, anger and betrayal extrememly 's voice that comes floating: singing the lullaby(which by the way is one of my favourite and very appropiatein this story)that comes floating to the room whereJames and Sirius try to come to terms with their realisations ,that last goodbye which ends the story,the play of light and shadow, and the wayt you began the story-with the faintest hints of a happy past...creats a very haunting image.

Oh God. For my fic Winterstar I have to write a similar chapter to this scenario, and I just realized that it's never going to be as good as this. *sniffs*

You are ridiculously good at emotions, my friend. Please never stop writing...and I mean that. Excellent, excellent work.

Ivy

this was really good~

Aw! That's so sad. Poor Remus! You just made me hate Peter even more... and beleive me, that's hard to do! Anyway, fantastic fic!

brilliant.

Really good idea! Could've used a bit more meat though. I would have liked to have seen more about why they could accept Remus as the traitor on such flimsy evidence. Lots of potential, though.