| Reviews for Falling for a Killer |
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   Optomistic Emo Kleptomaniac chapter 4 . 11/21/2008 NYU please update soon |
| kittycat3191 chapter 4 . 11/3/2007 This story is getting interesting. Please update soon. . |
| Animejo chapter 4 . 1/24/2007 Fic jumps all over the place (you need to work on transitioning from one scene to another), but it's a very cool, unique AU. You might want to proofread a few more times or invest in a beta, however. You seem to have thrown out all commas and have many misspellings. (ex. defiantly/definately should be definitely, aloud should be allowed, chocked should be choked, and board should've been bored) Trust me, after freshman year, things only get harder. Er, if you want to be gritty, don't use "manhood". It just isn't a good substitute for the penis, not when used in the context of non-consensual sex. |
| Pain-is-better-than-nothing chapter 4 . 11/15/2006 NO! Come back soon! I really want to read more! |
| Chasyn chapter 4 . 9/27/2006 NO! *cries* I must know what happens next! *sniffles* But I can understand life getting in the way... it tends to do that. |
| Chasyn chapter 1 . 9/27/2006 Oh! *runs off to read next chapter* |
| j0wey chapter 4 . 8/30/2006 aw i can understand that... -sniffle- but take your good old time my dear and i'm looking foreward to the next chapter |
| MuchoHola chapter 4 . 8/23/2006 M. I like this story. I think I'll look at your others since this one's on hold. You're starting high school! Ahaha, no way! So am I, I'm slightly nervous. But, oh well. Good luck with the whole moving thing, ] |
| gold and blizzard chapter 4 . 8/21/2006 Nya don't! i'm starting my first year in highschool and i'm moving in a few months too! but i'm still gonna write! DON'T DO IT! ... |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/21/2006 u suck. |
| happen0stance chapter 4 . 8/20/2006 Heya, thats cool about waiting, i am the master of waiting and I can't believe you are only just starting high school, I wouldv'e said you were atleast my age, which is the big grade tenner that I am, but anyway good luck with highschool and sorry to wreck any good expectations you have but its pretty shit...sorry...runs and hides |
| Raven Black chapter 4 . 8/19/2006 hey perfectly understandable on the high school deal and moving. it's easy to get distracted. Thanks for the heads up though and have fun your first year. freshman year can be fun if you kow how to do it. Enjoy |
| happen0stance chapter 3 . 8/18/2006 Ooh, I'm so sorry I didn't read this earlier I'm a slack arse and I know it so sorry. But this is brilliant, absolutely brilliant and I can't wait to see what happens next so please hurry, thanks...And I love innocent little Sora...Riku will save him Right? Right? |
| dead edged blade chapter 3 . 8/10/2006 This is amusing as hell! I love it! |
| Mistaya's57Dice chapter 3 . 5/30/2006 wow this is great i love it plz keep going u r evil i need to no wat happens plz update! u r a great writer!i love it! ~dicE AkA mE |
