| Reviews for Arranged Marriage |
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Santi chapter 21 . 8/23/2015 I bet that you're a wide reader as I am. Your ideas matched mine. I hope you continue writing about DNAngel though. |
Lovin'MyBooks chapter 25 . 11/30/2013 So funny! I loved it. Can't wait to read the next part |
Yael2315 chapter 6 . 5/5/2011 ...I'm a little confused... when Daisuke met Riku I didn't feel that he fell in love with Riku ...Its a little but flat for me... ...no offence... |
Y chapter 4 . 5/4/2011 hi! ...can I just ask if you know what POV stands for... ...it's POINT OF VIEW... ...so instead of (this is only an example)dark went to the bathroom, it should be: I went to the bathroom: ,likewise to any character... ...hehe!sorry for the lecture... ...just correcting if you don't mind... ...but great stuff keep it coming 'kay... ...well ciao fpr now... |
Yael2315 chapter 2 . 5/4/2011 ...I think this chapter has a lot of error's esp. with you grammar... ...but I still like it... ...i'll be rooting for you!... |
Yael2315 chapter 1 . 5/4/2011 Hi!... Great start...I'm loving every moment of it... Thanks for uploading... |
unmistakably forbidden chapter 25 . 8/4/2009 LOL, I can't wait to read the sequel. It's a good story you have [; |
6yn chapter 3 . 1/31/2009 it's very annoying on how you write these chapters... it's very incomplete! like the name of riku & risa's mom.. their pov's is also wrong! the grammar & spelling is also incorrect... i'm sorry if i disappoint you with this review/feedback. i just hope that you woul make it better if i point out what's wrong... the plot is nice but please fix it... |
xTxNxLx chapter 25 . 5/24/2008 great story not the biggest fan of dariku but i cant find many good dairiku so yea i really enjoyed this story although... hmm... ailthough... well whatever! great story D |
Domini-chan chapter 1 . 4/24/2008 He's not WAY older than her, but he's perverted allright. Very perverted. But that's what makes Dark so special to us XD! |
CriticismWiz.NeedAnOpinion-Ask chapter 25 . 10/17/2007 HeyHey! I just started reading this story today and I could not stop reading until I finished it. I loved the plot, and the writing was really good and what you did with the whole Risa/Riku sister rivalry thing in some of the earlier chapters was a very nice twist to the story, Risa falling in love with Daisuke and all...Well I'm going to checkout the sequel, can't wait until Riku and Dark get married ~~Beautifully-Broken-Athena |
Nyla chapter 25 . 10/9/2007 Please continue this story I love it |
Breathlessly Wicked chapter 25 . 9/30/2007 COOL! Siy Rowling? |
Panda-no-Yuuhi chapter 25 . 9/28/2007 If you don't upload soon then I don't know how i'll survive lol This is such a brill story, I can really see this happening:) |
mia chapter 25 . 9/22/2007 awesome |