hi! its shakira, i just wanted to say that this is one of the best naley fanfiction stories i have read so far. They also one of my favourite tv couples.
I dont know if you still writing stories but if you could try writing (unexpected feelings ) that would be an awesome storyline for naley.
thank you! happy writing

I'm so annoyed right now. It's totally unrealistic and incoherent to think that Nathan and Haley had this right bond from birth and then Rachel walks in his life and he's not even in love with her but takes her word over haleys continuously. He sacrificed their friendship for that. So either they weren't that close to begin with or something is really off. Not only that, she loses her baby because of his girlfriend and we're supposed to believe that she just forgives him? Especially since he eats up all that Rachel lies about and only belived Lucas when it was all said and done. And to top it all off, there's no real explanation for why he was such a prick all this time and no one is blaming him. They are all acting like he's some victim of Rachel's web. Please, he's a smart enough person he could've read the signs. Nothing makes sense and I don't really even care if they get together. She deserves better than Nathan.

I don't like how Nathan so easily belives whatever Rachel says. Haley is supposed to be his best friend since birth and yet he doubts her honesty about serious things all the time. Like a pregnancy being his. I just don't think that their relationship is all that believable if he has so little faith in her. At this point, I'm not even sure I'd want them together if he's like that.

can't wait for the sequel to this amazing story!

Rachho as Brooke named her is the worst person on the planet pushing Hales down the stairs causing her to lose the baby then lying to her boyfriend about it seriously hes the father! Rachho makes me sick!

I hope to god that Rachel isn't the girl Nathan ends up with!

Just finished reading this whole story for the first time and I think it was amazing. Hope you write another naley one like this again soon please

loved!

loved your story keep writing

This was such a beautiful story !

Hated Rachel from the start haha!

Love me some Naley

I really like the start of this story... It passed my preread, so I think I will actually read it.

I just.. Keep reading this fic every once in awhile because I think that it's really beautiful! You wrote an excellent story and I would love to be able to read the end of the sequel! It's amazing! I know, now that OTH is over it is strange to think about these things but... I loved the show soo much and sometimes I just feel the need to login and read something good about it! I'm complimenting with you because again.. You did a good job with this one here! Xo ;)

I've just recently got sucked into the charm of Naley as I have just been sucked into OTH, and let me tell ya... first chapter done tonight whole story done by the end of this week. This is the first review I'm sending out to anything but my used-to-be comfort zone for Glee, but I'm really diggin' the plot so far and as for the writing goes, you have a real knack for it. I'm excited to read more.

Omg so excited about this story!

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