That was a great story. Amazing. I was crying the last chapter I thought spot was being a real jackass, but I think she should have punched him after she realized he was kidding. I would have.

This is like...one of my favorite stories. Ever! I love it!

WHAT?! WHAT?! WHAT THE?!
*breaks off into obseneties*

ADAM AND EVE! EPIIIC! And did you really get into a fight? Oh, you are SO lucky...

Awesome story :D loved it! :))))))

I really did love this story. I think the rating was a bit off for some of the more graphic scenes but the overall story line was creative and suspenseful. The ending was good, too. Pissed me off a bit because I thought it was going to be sad but I am extremely happy I was mistaken. _ Thanks

That was amazing! You should be an author!

I loved this story!

Granted it took me a few days to read , but it was worth it. I like how the whole story wasn't just about Anomie and Spot. She had a life other than just a guy. Although it wasn't the best of lives, you made it work for your character. All the "tests" that they went through, relates to the tests that life throws at us; I'm just glad those tests aren't what I have to go through. It was a great outline, I loved how the story as a whole was set up. I felt so bad it the end when her friend died; but it goes to show that life isn't fair to nice people.

In all, I loved the story, and I hope there is a sequal or another story that I will greatly enjoy.

YAY :D

I loved it so much! At times it was confusing but that's ok. This story was different from all the others! Who did Anomie kill? The dead body test was like my favorite part ever. What happened to Madeline? I hope you update your sequel soon because you left it at anomie hanging over the brooklyn bridge! Lol talk about a cliffhanger!

Right. This most definitely should not be rated K. In fact, it ought to be rated T, or better yet, M. It's a good story, it's just that The Newsies is a kids movie, and K is generally considered appropriate for kids. And this story is not appropriate for anything less than teens.

Wow, that was amazing! It took me a few days to read, but it was well worth it. I am totally in love. Everything about it was perfect. Well, actually I had a few things I wanted to say, but I forgot all of them... lol so I guess they weren't that big of a deal. ;)

Sequel! YES! Although it would be hard not to completely have it be covered in fluff... but anywho I think you should. I am curious about everything. How Ned knew about Spot and the box and the woman who talked to Anomie on the bench. Everything was so perfectly planned out, wow I loved it.

Good job

Danc4him

lol, adam and eve, cute

loved it. really loved it

OMG! this is a really good story...I'm so jealous of you...it's amazing! I love it...Anomie is just the kind of kick ass girl that rocks...and Spot is simply one of my favorite newsies several pluses for that. It's so well written and it was an interesting plot, very original...good job!