| Reviews for Living in the Fast Lane |
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Guest chapter 14 . 10/14/2019 la suite de vivre dans la vioe rapide |
ViolentHappyChick chapter 14 . 3/19/2014 Type your review for this chapter here... |
SILVER chapter 14 . 1/3/2014 I liked the plot but to me it seemed to move pretty fast. The progression of their relationship was a bit fast and the major conflicts were also resolved a bit too quickly for my liking. Not too bash this in any, I enjoyed the descriptions, writing and cute scenes between those two. As for street racing? Definitely original compared to other stories centralizing around those two :) Nice job! |
ZarahJade chapter 14 . 5/9/2011 This story was simply amazing! I loved it! :) |
ZarahJade chapter 2 . 5/8/2011 I love this fic! FINALLY someone who writes about racing and actually knows about cars! I like that its not just "He had a nice car (you can choose whatever you want because I dont know) and he never lost. the end." Those fics get annoying. Plus girls writing about this stuff just makes it even better ;) Gotta prove to those boys we know what we're doing! Great job! |
Kaito Echizen chapter 14 . 1/7/2011 very good Kaito hungry want to eat |
Lzay-Niight chapter 11 . 11/4/2009 ...this is sasunaru my friend and if you were trying to do narusasu your not doing a very good job! good plot tho but i think i'm gunna stop here! ~Bye |
sasodei-iz-awesome chapter 14 . 10/10/2009 Aw, this was good! It was adorable too. Peace, love, and all that shit... ~Sasodeiizawesome~ |
Byebyei4gothisexisted chapter 14 . 6/16/2009 Hn |
Daisuki chapter 14 . 3/29/2009 Wow. I really enjoyed reading this. I was kind of edgy at first, because I didn't know a lot about street racing, or racing in general (_""), and I thought the components would be a large part of the story. I'm glad you just incorporated it into the story, so people with no life like me could understand. There was a perfect balance. The only thing I would say, is that I think the fic is Sasunaru, not Narusasu. I used to not care about these things, but now I only go for NS. There is a difference, and I know it's kinda picky. ._. In case you didn't know, Sasunaru: Seme!Sasu Uke!Naru Narusasu Seme!Naru Uke!Sasu. (you probably did. Sorry about that.) Anyway, I look forward to reading more stories from you! _~ |
roxxihearts chapter 14 . 7/18/2008 aw how sweet lovely story! |
roxxihearts chapter 4 . 7/18/2008 SAsuke is such a delinquent xP great story! |
roxxihearts chapter 1 . 7/17/2008 oo naru sounds smexy xD |
Estelle Stafford chapter 1 . 5/1/2008 I think I saw a couple of grammar errors, but I like this story so far. |
marimo head's lover chapter 1 . 1/27/2008 I loved this story. I thought it was great though I wish there'd be a sequel. |