Well I see whats happening to Remus mow and it's very interesting.

This looks promising please continue it I greatly enjoyed it's prequel story

Very original work here and looking forward to more!

X-D PERFECT timing! X-D

darn. I was just getting into it. I really need to check for complete. (I was hoping crumpets was first of a series)

Damn! This is where your muse ran out?

finish this story.

Nicely written, though there were points which... crap, how do I describe this...

(~5mins later) ...they were tasty in a story sort of way, but felt like it was delivered dry and almost stale. I don't know if that makes sense, but that's as best I can describe.

I've never found your writing like this in any of your other stories (which are awesome) so I thought it was worth a review.

Hope it helps and looking forward to reading more of your work!

-Talonis Wolf

Haha! Good start to a sequel. :)

i would hope that you complete this story sometime in the near future since it is part of a pair - or do you have more in store

Would be nice to have a satisfactory ending

I'm more than a little heartbroken that this isn't finished. I was thinking "crap, is this the instance where they lose the Promethius"...and it was and I found myself agreeing with Remus as well. ; Ah well, I enjoyed it while it lasted. :D

Wow, he's getting to be a lot like Rincewind,

I am enjoying this fanfiction :)

'Til next time

Lols. You should updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaate!