Reviews for Star Wars: Offense of the Shizz
Guest chapter 6 . 6/28/2013
this story BBBBBBLLLLLOOOOOWWWWWSSSSS COCK
Guest chapter 2 . 5/17/2013
haha omg i laughed the entire chapter
Furionknight chapter 6 . 5/17/2011
:)
sugar-high pixie chapter 6 . 7/5/2006
yeah you updated...okay well good chapter...can't wait to see what happens
Black Lord 500 chapter 6 . 7/3/2006
Man, this is one cool story. Keep up the good work.
sugar-high pixie chapter 5 . 5/25/2006
dang..that was hilrious...i'm still crackin up!
Black Lord 500 chapter 5 . 5/21/2006
Man, that chapter was gangsta. Keep it up!
Black Lord 500 chapter 4 . 5/12/2006
I enjoyed this chapter, keep up the good work with this and the other fic.
Super Tinfoil Man Part 2 chapter 4 . 5/11/2006
General G is a bad ass , he should've been more like this during the movie .
1138 chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
I LOVE this fanfic,update SOON!
JediMan chapter 4 . 5/4/2006
Great, I love the idea, but it seems impossible to block that stuff without the force. So, maybe the longer he is there he can sort of learn the force, or go through a new experieance where the break through his mind bearers. Thanks for including Aayla Secura!

-JM
Black Lord 500 chapter 3 . 4/14/2006
Nice chapter. This story is cool. Keep it up man
JediMan chapter 3 . 4/12/2006
Awesome improvements to understandability. Yeah, Barris Offee should be ticked off! You put Aayla in character pretty well. But Ani, he's not the same "I want more!" and no one could beat him without the force. I like Form V also, but with some Form II in it.
Black Lord 500 chapter 2 . 4/10/2006
I like this story. I don't think I need to tell you to keep up the good work, because you always do.
JediMan chapter 2 . 4/9/2006
Good Story Idea, don't make him too perfect, I suggest making Barris a weary softie, remember she can heal well. Aayla will have a fluent style, notibly with grace, a combination of Form V, and Form II. Anikan fights with Form V.
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