Honestly, I have never read a fanfiction which touched me so much in a way I cannot explain. Best Fanfiction I have ever read!

LOVE THIS.

"The scene where they all started chucking things at Cody almost broke my heart." - ACTUALLY SAME!
This chapter ALSO broke my heart so

This story was SO touching! I love the way the characters acted, and the way that Zack and Cody resolved the problem! At the end of all the chapters, I just felt...on the edge of my seat! I HAD to know what came next in the story! GREAT job! I hope you write a sequel to this story, because I'll definitely read it!

So sad I cried

Ooh this is amazing! I love it!

On another note; you should write a separate story about what happened when the ambulance showed up starting in the lobby of the hotel(with Carey Mosby London and Maddie in there) and how they react when Cody and Zack come down:D

Wow... this is GREAT! You should totally write more!

Oh My God. That was so sweet. I absolutely loved this story! :)

cute. very very cute

I love the lyrics becuase they emphasize both twin's feelings of regret but especially Cody's and also Zack's guilt as well.

The chapter ranged from Cody's fear of being alone again to Zack's hope and almost dispair and immeasurable fear of losing Cody permanently. Very well done.

The song lyrics fit the confusion, fear and pain of Zack and Cody well.

It's sad that Cody thought zack would hate him and yet not uncommon with the pain he dealt with.

Wow the end got me tearing up as I felt Zack's fear of losing his twin and his forceful use of the towel to stop the bleeding.

Thankfully Zack is showing the shock of doing the forbidden act of hitting his twin.

I love stunned reaction of Zack and everone in the gym.

The lyrics I can see describing Cody's pain and his thoughts to get along in life without Zack.

It shows how the bonds of life can be damaged or destroyed with one hit by one of the people who loves us the most.

I love the description of Cody's thoughts on the humiliation. i remember the episode being a little much on the embarassing side. i agree with you about that photo.

Zack's joking side was definitely pushed towards the extremely mean edge in the episode and this version he was more cold toward Cody.

Still Cody's anger got the best of him and this is the result. It shows Cody can fight back with a nasty streak like Zack can given the circumstances. In the end everything just steamrolled.

I like the way you have Cody's thoughts intermixed with his feelings and actions and he reacts to embarassing Zack. Two parts of his brain are fighting each other at the same time.

Zack hitting Cody hit me hard with the situation getting out of control.

I love the lyrics because they shows the belief Cody has in his thoughts and the pain and lonliness he is suffering from the punch and the embarassment.

this chapter wasnt lame at all, it was really touching. i almost cried :*)

so sweet. I loved it. Great job! ~Ellivia22~