WOW how do you come up with these stories. theyre amazing down to every detail. i liked the last part where candy knew she couldnt kill carrion even if it meant saving her own life.

THAT. WAS. AWESOME! it was so incredibly similar to the dreams i have because im always scared and running away in them. the part about waking up in her classroom and the abarat being all just a dream was clever. that was exhilarating. anyway this story is creepily similar to my dreams but thats why i liked it so much

This would be even more awesome if you added another chappy-ter!

Even now, it is excellent. Please continue.

Like I said, please continue. (My polite side)

Or

MORE MORE MORE! (My rude side)

I had my wisdom teeth pulled out not too long ago myself and I never thought to torture poor innocent made-up characters from a crazy book ;) lol I like where this is going and I need to continue to read I just thought I would stop to mention the wisdom teeth thing. It's horrible isn't it? I took painkillers and it was still a drag

...wel Damn...That Was Bloody...BLoody and Bold Good-ness!

Oh. My. God.

Really, really awesomely astounding fanfic. It's excellent! It would be really nice if you'd add another chapter. I liked the way you wrote the scene in Chapter 1 with Carrion chasing her. You can really write the emotion terror well. The description of exactly what she's feeling as she's about to die is so good it's creepy.

Did Carrion really die, or was it just a dream? I'd love an update.

~The Freak

This chapter was very good. The writing style was very pretty.

Awesome as always! Cant wait to read more, to see the outcome of this and her internal struggle.

xoxo

ZL

Please don't have Christopher die! He already died once! Please don't do it again! (Up-date soon.)

Hey, don't complain about your wisdom teeth. I have 8 of them, and all need to come out! (They took an x-ray, and they saw another set of wisdom teeth behind the first set. My mom had a laughing fit.) Good story. You made Christopher Carrion into the Freddy Kreuger of the Abarat! (Did I spell Freddy's last name right?) lol.

OOh! Creepy! *shudders* Yet awesome. Bravo!

xoxo

ZL

WHAT? THAT"S IT? could you please add one more chapter? i'd like to see where you would go. Great story, i thought candy was going to die until the last minute. great story! good in the sense that it follows the book. i also want to see candy's reaction. keep writing (please!)

lady moon dragon

interesting...sad...

Not quite sure how to react to this one...it's cold...cold and scary. I donated blood today and so it was the last thing i wanted to read about but you didn't write it too horribly graphically...aka colors, texture. It was excellent writing.

That was odd.

Beautifully written. Quite amazing, really. It just seems so...right. Exactly as though it was lifted right out of the books. Congratulations, and keep writing!