Reviews for Darkness Unveiled |
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Guest chapter 3 . 6/1 soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good |
Guest chapter 12 . 3/7 Lily, shut the fuck up please |
Guest chapter 6 . 3/7 I stand good Tom riddle |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/7 Oooo someone’s in troubleeeeee~~~. This was amazing I love it |
Guest chapter 10 . 11/5/2019 You would think Voldemort would be a little more controlled at the end, if you know what I mean. |
mumphie chapter 18 . 10/28/2019 I am so sad that 'real-life'? has caused you to abandon this story. It is well written, flows - oh so well - is intriguing and draws the reader in. What were you planning? Would Harry get his memories corrected? If so, he's remember the coldness of his parents, and warmth of his godfathers. He'd probably be irritated or severely angry at the DL. Was Harry going to switch sides? Stay with the Dark? Either way, he'd find his path troublesome and guilt , if you definitely decide NOT to ever come back, you could write a chapter with a summary of your thoughts on where this was going to go? |
mumphie chapter 13 . 10/28/2019 Ummm - isn't there a way that Harry will remember how much he loved Siri and Remus? How much they loved him and helped him? I feel so sorry for those two. I wish little Harry had run to them instead of where he did - but then you wouldn't have YOUR story! Is there some neutral way to handle this? Or is there just going to be heartbreak no matter what? |
mumphie chapter 1 . 10/28/2019 Awww - I feels very sorry for Sirius and Remus! |
mumphie chapter 2 . 7/30/2019 I don't know why Harry didn't just try to live with Sirius. I figure he was too little to understand and just ran away. |
HPPJOHoOHGfan chapter 18 . 6/3/2019 NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! YOU CANNOT DO THIS TO ME! YOU ABANDONED THIS GREAT STORY! HOW DARE YOU! WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME! D.: |
Mamy 83 chapter 18 . 5/20/2019 Quel dommage qu'il n'y ait pas de suite à cette merveilleuse histoire. Manque de temps, d'inspiration. C'est toujours pareil, quand une histoire est bonne,il n'y a jamais de fin |
Guest chapter 18 . 12/11/2018 Harry has a secret weapon waiting for him in a certain chamber back at hogwarts... |
ReDEAR chapter 18 . 9/9/2018 It's been over a decade since you last updated, but I really thinkthat you should re-visit this story. It has so much more potential. I can't wait to see how you continue it. Please please please continue it. |
loleverybody chapter 1 . 7/13/2018 U had an interesting plot but u destroy it with your writing... |
Rainbow Prime chapter 14 . 7/8/2018 No! Voldemort, this is your chance to get Sirius Black and Remus Lupin to join you! And be your spies in the Order of the Phoenix! Do it! You know you want to! |