Oh God...how much more brilliant this chapter can ever get? I love this.

Perfection. I am loving this chapter.

What an insightful prelude. You know right away this is going to be a very strong story by itself.

I love it. I hope more chapters will come pretty soon. It's such a wonderful read. I have so much love for Mika X Tohma fics.

Whoa! That was deep and foreshadow... y! YEAH

I'm not a huge fan of Gravi stories that are Tohma- or Mika-centric (or really anyone other than Yuki/Shu- or Ryu-centric), but I love your other work so I gave this a try.

I am thoroughly enjoying this piece of writing and I sincerely hope that you decide to update it soon.

Now that I'm done being serious,

UPDATE SOON, NA NO DA!

~Chika

There's more right? A fic that starts to explain how Nittle Grasper got together and how Tohma met Mika and Eiri? You've got a great start please keep going. I mean I've always wanted to know why Tohma was the one allowed to pick Eiri's tutor and to take him to NYC?

Interesting take on Mika's, Eiri's and Touma's childhood...very well written and entertaining; hope that you'll continue/finish this fanfic.

This is a very beautiful story. There is something very cold in both Mika and Tohma here, though much more pronounced in Tohma, and it's that coldness where the beauty lies. I'm not sure how to explain it. There's an exacting quality in the way Tohma narrates that makes his chapters very different from Mika's, and yet they're both similar, sad people. The first real burst of life came from Ryuuichi, which makes it all feel so right. I don't know exactly how to explain it, other than that I'm very impressed by what is here and I hope you'll continue writing. Thank you for such an intriguing work, and good luck on your future chapters.

I read your story and I just Love it! I've been waiting for someone to write a Mika and Tohma background story! You have amazing talent, writing is your thing! Promise me you'll update soon! .

It's NekoYoukaiChan again. Didn't I tell you to update? I'm sorry for pestering you, but I really want to read the next chapter. PLEASE1?1?1?1?1?1?

Are you a music major, because you seem to know a lot about music, both technically and ... spiritually ...

This totally rocks, you totally rock, and I would like more please!

Wow... You. rock. hard.

Simply amazing. While reading the Gravitation Manga, I've always found myself wondering how Nittle Grasper had started or what Tohma and Mika's backstory was. Reading this, thought its not the official story, makes so much sense that its utterly breathtaking.

Wow. This story is quite simply breath taking. It's very rare that I'm able to say that about something, and even more so able to be said about the first story I read in a genre. But this has captured me in a way that hasn't happened to me in a VERY long time. Congrats. Will there be more? I do hope so!

~AC