Just found this story and I like it so far, you're writing style is very good. Don't like that they're fighting though, hope they make up soon lol

This whole story is a bunch of sweet sweet fluffy romance and although I'm not exactly in touch with my feminine side, I really enjoyed about this and fully agree that it is not the lack of ups and downs that make a strong relationship. It's the willigness to stick together and work it out in spite of highs and lows. Good job. I feel all warm inside from your bonus chapter and "private time" and the maturing of Squall and Rinoa

Cheers

Keep Writing

Cheers

Keep Writing

I must say this is a very enjoyable read. I especially liked Squall's coma and the sense of 'awakening', for lack of a better term, that it brought.

The part with Squall as a dance instructor also brought a good laugh. Priceless. Poor Squall :)

Thank you for this. Adding to favorites, something I haven't done for some time. Well done!

AHH! i loved it! i'm kinda sad cuz i don't have time to read the bonus chapter(s) right now... but anyway, that was great. very heart-wrenching, to say the least. write another one soon!

this chapter made me wanna cry! but then i laughed when you introduced irvine. i love how in every story, irvine has to enter in flirting. haha. but anyway, good work, again. time for chapter three!

geeze! that was so good! i was completely absorbed in this chapter from the moment i started it! good work :]

Awh I haven't read a fluffy Squinoa story in ages! I liked this story a lot, so much so I read it all in one go. I'm glad that Squall and Rinoa worked everything out. Just like in real life, relationships have their ups and downs and times when its about to break apart, but the fact that they pulled through shows how strong they are.

It was well written. Loved it!

~Lionheart1

oh...i love it. is this the end? i love it. it's so sweet and nice. more more more...

Sorry about not reading this earlier. Classes have gotten the best of me.

Well, I liked the dance scene when Squall's instructing the cadets. You pulled it off really well with the girl basically hero worshiping Squall.

You should be proud, this is a very beautiful story, Jay! I'm sorry I couldn't review in time when it was first completed, but as usual, something came a long and knocked me off my trail in this road called life, lol. Your writing is handsome, and you're very talented! (As well as your videos, lol! Mine are so chaotic, it's sad, lol!) You're got the fluff downpacked, especially in chapter 3 when Squall's thinking back from a scene in their relationship, oh HOW SWEET! Reading this story has reminded me to take my time, and allow things to come naturally, to channel inner emotions and write them down to create the canvas of a marvelous story, (ahaha, that was a long and corny sentence, but it's true, lol) whether that story is for here or for some other thing. Ah, it's good to sit back and read works like this, Congrats for your first fic! I loved it, you truly are a marvelous writer!

Well then, (and Long time no See! What's up! lol)Take care,

~Star~

aww, that was so cute. great ending! I can't beleive they sneaked around for that long!

Hey there! Great chapter, but it was a little too predictable. I knew that was going to happen since like the beginning of the chapter, but it was still cute! I'm glad you updated, made my day. DD Well, I hope to see another update!

Aww how beautiful! really sweet. go squinoa!

It's great to know you decided to write this "bonus chapter", all the Squall and Trepies thing was very funny. Hope to see the second part soon. Thank you.

Hey! Glad to see you're still alive! Lol. Great chapter. Squall teaching dance? That just isn't him. Wow. Well, still a good chapter. ) I hope to see an update soon so I don't think you're dead! P