O don't know why I secretly ship these two XD

Please continue the story, it's off to a good start and I like it.

delightful.

XD

You are so good!

I remember finding your Jafar/Jasmine fic ages ago - and some long series of favelist-hopping has led me to this.

You did a wonderful job of keeping Tenten and Kankuro in character - I only wish this was longer, and there had been more opportunity for in-battle trashtalk, because you're obviously very good at it.

I love that you have them both represented as the consummate professional ninja they are - but I give an A plus to that thought of Kankuro's about these two simply being teenagers in love.

Really well done!

Great fic, I enjoyed reading it. :D

Simple, lingering on the line of just enough heat. I hope that maybe one day I can read a continuation, or a part two. Love the story.

love it want more

I loved your Tenten.

This was fun and hot.

yay loved it can't wait for the next chappie plz review soon :)

Great story! KankuTen is hot

i have added this story to my favorites not just because i am a kankuro/tenten fan and am willing to adore any story revolving around the couple, but also because of the way it has been written and the plot. i loved the tension in the fic and i can only hope that maybe you'll continue to write more kankuro/tenten fics! (hinthint

nice, I think you caught their personalities perfectly*

That was hot... :D

it was good...left with a strong desire for this to continue somewhere...