Nice

Wow. I have never read a more descriptive fanfiction. I swear, this is not a first attempt. You must have done this before! It's too good to be a first attempt!

This is a true work of art and I didn't realize how much I had missed it before I read it. You have truly made Kit come alive in this one, he felt really authentic. Keep it up!

Very well done, especially for a first fanfic. This was about the time I started out. A shame you didn't write more; the potential is there.

I absolutely loved this story. I thought it was tastefully done. Great job

You know why I hate you so much? It's because of what you've done to these characters you bitch read the damn source material before you make a fan fiction

Ok firstly what the hell is this bullshit I'm having to review. You bitch. You made kit fisto more ridiculous than Ron burgundy. Here's a tip, research the fucking source material. And further more you have ruined these characters for-fucking-ever. You punk ass bitch

I love it! I wish that there was more, too.

Your story gave the term "First Aid Kit" a totally new and fresh meaning ;) .

Pink Ikawa 001 summed it up perfectly. :D This is a very modest and romantic love story not necessary to be rated M because there is no description of any sexual acts, violence or coarse language. I enjoyed every word in it. I didn't read the original comic which this story is based on. But you gave me a perfect insight into Kits and Aaylas character too. Thank you for this IMHO well-done and perfectly chiseled story.

I wished the story would end up like a Leslie Winkle-relationship (do you know "The Big Bang Theory"?)dimmed at most time to set free the pent-up passion until the very last moment once a year. But your ending is far more star-wars-realistic and character-credible.

This was absolutely incredible! I had just read the comic online that you got the base of the story from, and you have described it amazingly. I indeed wish there was more to read on this, but the ending is quite satisfying. This is definitely one of my favourite stories, and I thank you for writing it! :D

I love this I wish there was more

Oh my gosh FINALLY I got an account so I can review this! This has been my favourite Kit/Aayla story EVER since I read it on livejournal AGES ago! I love how you portrayed their conflicting emotions, and their love ALL whilst keeping them perfectly in-character. Perfect ending too, however I've personally always thought they should be together. Ah well. Still an EXCELLENT story.

Aw! I loved that! I always thought there should've been something that happened after he saved her. I must say, your writing skills are really good. I wish I could write that! It's too bad they cant be free to be with eachother. :( But overall, that was an amazing story! :)

-Bella

great story man i loved every word. the only thing that im bummed about is that Kit and Aayla did not end up together. The Jedi Code sucks. Great story man.

I love Kit and enjoyed this story. Didn't much care for the sad ending. Didn't they get married in the comics? Did you mention that earlier? (Too lazy to go back and look.) Anyhoo - great job. Favorited.