I loved it! You portrayed the characters perfectly. I would say write more , but you probably will not since this is like seven years old

Lol. The ending was really unexpected-Made me laugh. :D

a very interesting stroy!

I think you did good work on this tory, it came out rather well.

I liked the touch of the ghost part at the end. your right about one thing what's a halloween story with out at least one ghost story.

a well done story.